Anoop, Thank you very much for the review and the comments. Here is the revision that has addressed all your comments: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage/
Thank you, Linda From: BESS <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Anoop Ghanwani Sent: Tuesday, March 28, 2023 1:37 PM To: [email protected] Subject: Re: [bess] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-07.txt I had a couple of minor editorial nits on this. I sent them offline to Linda and she suggested I send them to the list. SDWAN is normally written SD-WAN. C-PE is not defined. We are missing an expansion/reference for NHRP, and also expansion for DMVPN/DSVPN. I wonder if we can have better references for DMVPN/DSVPN since the references provided (URLs) are likely to become inaccessible after some time. On Sun, Jan 29, 2023 at 3:11 PM <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the BGP Enabled ServiceS WG of the IETF. Title : BGP Usage for SDWAN Overlay Networks Authors : Linda Dunbar James Guichard Ali Sajassi John Drake Basil Najem David Carrel Filename : draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-07.txt Pages : 28 Date : 2023-01-29 Abstract: The document discusses the usage and applicability of BGP as the control plane for multiple SDWAN scenarios. The document aims to demonstrate how the BGP-based control plane is used for large-scale SDWAN overlay networks with little manual intervention. SDWAN edge nodes are commonly interconnected by multiple types of underlay networks owned and managed by different network providers. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage/ There is also an htmlized version available at: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-07 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-07 Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts _______________________________________________ BESS mailing list [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess
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