Author: randy
Date: 2007-10-16 05:56:37 -0600 (Tue, 16 Oct 2007)
New Revision: 7114
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/book/organization.xml
trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libgsf.xml
trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml
trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-audio.xml
trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-media.xml
trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/libgnomeprint.xml
trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml
trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml
trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/credits.xml
trunk/BOOK/kde/add/kdeutils.xml
trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdebase.xml
trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdelibs.xml
trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml
trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml
trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml
trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-config.xml
trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x7server.xml
trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnucash.xml
Log:
Fixed numerous typos, ommisions and corrections by applying patches provided by
Chris Staub - Thanks, Chris
Modified: trunk/BOOK/book/organization.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/book/organization.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/book/organization.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -66,8 +66,7 @@
<para><application>GNOME</application> is the main alternative to
<application>KDE</application> in the Desktop Environment arena and
- we cover both <application>GNOME</application>-1.4
- and <application>GNOME</application>-&gnome-version; here.</para>
+ we cover <application>GNOME</application>-&gnome-version; here.</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part X - X Software</bridgehead>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libgsf.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libgsf.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev
7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libgsf.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev
7114)
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
<segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
<seglistitem>
- <seg>gsf-office-thumbnailer (optional)</seg>
+ <seg>gsf, gsf-office-thumbnailer (optional), and gsf-vba-dump</seg>
<seg>libgsf-1.{so,a} and optionally, libgsf-gnome-1.{so,a}</seg>
<seg>/usr/include/libgsf-1 and /usr/share/gtk-doc/html/gsf</seg>
</seglistitem>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev
7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev
7114)
@@ -91,9 +91,10 @@
<para><command>sed -i 's/null ;/null 2>\&1 ;/'
update-pciids.sh</command>: This command suppresses some unneeded screen
output from the <command>update-pciids</command> command if you don't have
- either <application>Lynx</application> or <application>Wget</application>
- installed by redirecting the stderr output of the embedded
- <command>which</command> command to <filename>/dev/null</filename>.</para>
+ either <application>Lynx</application>, <application>Wget</application>,
+ or <application>Curl</application> installed by redirecting the stderr
+ output of the embedded <command>which</command> command to
+ <filename>/dev/null</filename>.</para>
</sect2>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-audio.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-audio.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev
7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-audio.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev
7114)
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
<para>The <application>gnome-audio</application> package contains a set
of default sounds for the <application>GNOME</application> GUI desktop.
Sound files for startup, shutdown and many GTK+ events are included.
- These sounds compliment the <application>GNOME Media</application>
+ These sounds complement the <application>GNOME Media</application>
package.</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect3">Package Information</bridgehead>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-media.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-media.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev
7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-media.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev
7114)
@@ -57,8 +57,7 @@
<bridgehead renderas="sect3">GNOME Media Dependencies</bridgehead>
<bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
- <para role="required"><xref linkend="perl-xml-parser"/>,
- <xref linkend="scrollkeeper"/>,
+ <para role="required"><xref linkend="scrollkeeper"/>,
<xref linkend="esound"/>, and
<xref linkend="libgnomeui"/></para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/libgnomeprint.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/libgnomeprint.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev
7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/libgnomeprint.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev
7114)
@@ -58,7 +58,6 @@
<bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
<para role="required"><xref linkend="pango"/>,
<xref linkend="libart_lgpl"/>,
- <xref linkend="fontconfig"/>,
<xref linkend="popt"/>,
<xref linkend="libxml2"/>, and
<xref linkend="perl-xml-parser"/></para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC
(rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC
(rev 7114)
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>If you are having a problem compiling the package, try
searching the LFS archives at
- <ulink url="http://search.&lfs-domainname;/"/> for the error or if
+ <ulink url="http://www.&lfs-domainname;/search.html"/> for the error or
if
that fails, try searching Google. If everything else fails,
try the blfs-support mailing-list.</para>
</listitem>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC
(rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC
(rev 7114)
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para><ulink url="mailto:highos@&lfs-domainname;";>Jesse
- Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> <higho <at> @&lfs-domainname;> for
+ Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> <higho <at> &lfs-domainname;> for
answering many questions on IRC, having a great deal of patience and for
not killing the former editor for the joke in the original BLFS
announcement!</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC
(rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC
(rev 7114)
@@ -45,7 +45,11 @@
<para>October 16th, 2007</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>[name] - Updated the Evince instructions to reflect the
+ <para>[randy] - Fixed numerous typos, ommisions and corrections
+ by applying patches provided by Chris Staub. Thanks, Chris.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>[randy] - Updated the Evince instructions to reflect the
GNOME-2.18.3 update.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/credits.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/credits.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev
7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/credits.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev
7114)
@@ -140,12 +140,12 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Chapters 28 and 29: KDE:
+ <para>Chapters 28, 29, and 30: KDE:
<emphasis>Bruce Dubbs</emphasis>.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Chapters 30, 31, and 32: GNOME:
+ <para>Chapters 31 and 32: GNOME:
<emphasis>Larry Lawrence</emphasis>.</para>
</listitem>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/kde/add/kdeutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/kde/add/kdeutils.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/kde/add/kdeutils.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -102,9 +102,9 @@
<segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
<seglistitem>
- <seg>ark, irkick, kcalc, kcharselect, kdf, kedit, kfloppy,
- kgpg, khexedit, kjots, kregexpeditor, ktimer, kwalletmanager,
- and superkaramba</seg>
+ <seg>ark, irkick, kcalc, kcharselect, kdessh, kdf, kedit, kfloppy,
+ kgpg, khexedit, kjots, klaptop_acpi_helper, klaptop_check,
+ kregexpeditor, ktimer, kwalletmanager, kwikdisk, and superkaramba</seg>
<seg>Several kdeutils specific libraries</seg>
<seg>Several subdirectories in $KDE_PREFIX/share</seg>
</seglistitem>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdebase.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdebase.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdebase.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -169,13 +169,13 @@
<seglistitem>
<seg>appletproxy, drkonqi, extensionproxy, genkdmconf, kaccess,
kappfinder, kapplymousetheme, kasbar, kate, kblankscrn.kss,
- kbookmarkmerger, kcheckpass, kcheckrunning, kcminit, kcontrol,
- kcontroledit, kdcop, kdebugdialog, kdeeject, kdeinstallktheme,
+ kbookmarkmerger, kcheckpass, kcheckrunning, kcminit, kcminit_startup,
+ kcontrol, kcontroledit, kdcop, kdebugdialog, kdeeject,
kdeinstallktheme,
kdepasswd, kdeprintfax, kdesktop, kdesktop_lock, kdesu, kdesud,
kdialog,
kdm, kdm_config, kdm_greet, kdmctl, keditbookmarks, keditfiletype,
kfind, kfmclient, kfontinst, kfontview, khc_docbookdig.pl,
khc_htdig.pl,
khc_htsearch.pl, khc_indexbuilder, khc_mansearch.pl, khelpcenter,
- khotkeys, kicker, kinfocenter, kio_media_mounthelper,
+ khotkeys, kicker, kinfocenter (link to kcontrol),
kio_media_mounthelper,
kio_system_documenthelper, kjobviewer, klipper,
klocaldomainurifilterhelper, kmenuedit, knetattach, kompmgr, konqueror,
konsole, kpager, kpersonalizer, kpm, kprinter, krandom.kss, krandrtray,
Modified: trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdelibs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdelibs.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdelibs.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@
ksendbugmail, kshell, kstartupconfig, ksvgtopng, ktelnetservice,
ktradertest, kunittestmodrunner, kwrapper, lnusertemp,
make_driver_db_cups, make_driver_db_lpr, makekdewidgets, meinproc,
- and preparetips</seg>
+ preparetips, and start_kdeinit</seg>
<seg>Numerous <application>KDE</application> libraries and helper
modules</seg>
<seg>/etc/kde and the following subdirectories of &kde-dir;/:
Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev
7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev
7114)
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
<para>This section is really about creating a <emphasis>rescue</emphasis>
device. As the name <emphasis>rescue</emphasis> implies, the host
system has a problem, often lost partition information or corrupted file
- systems, that prevent it from booting and/or operating normally. For
+ systems, that prevents it from booting and/or operating normally. For
this reason, you <emphasis>must not</emphasis> depend on resources from
the host being "rescued". To presume that any given partition or hard
drive <emphasis>will</emphasis> be available is a risky presumption.</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@
<title>Configuration Information</title>
<para><application>Vim-7.0</application> introduced an
- integrated spell checker that doesn't requires additional libraries to be
+ integrated spell checker that doesn't require additional libraries to be
installed. To enable the spell checker you can set the following in
one of the configuration files: </para>
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
from: <ulink url="ftp://ftp.vim.org/pub/vim/runtime/spell/"/> and save
them to <filename class="directory"> ~/.vim/spell </filename> or in
<filename class="directory">
- /usr/share/vim/vim70/spell/</filename>.</para>
+ /usr/share/vim/vim71/spell/</filename>.</para>
<para>For more information about the spell checker and some other
features in <application>Vim-&vim-version;</application> (such us
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@
<para>A list of the reinstalled files, along with their short
descriptions can be found in the <ulink
url="&lfs-root;/chapter06/vim.html#contents-vim">LFS Vim Installation
- Instrutions</ulink></para>
+ Instructions</ulink></para>
<segmentedlist>
<segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -93,11 +93,11 @@
<sect2 role="installation">
<title>Installation of ZSH</title>
- <para>If you downloaded the optional documentation, unpack it the same
- way you would the source tarball. The documentation will unpack into
- the <filename class='directory'>Doc</filename> directory of the source
- tree.</para>
+ <para>If you downloaded the optional documentation, unpack it with
+ the following command:</para>
+<screen><userinput>tar --strip-components=1 -xvf
../zsh-&zsh-version;-doc.tar.bz2</userinput></screen>
+
<para>Install <application>ZSH</application> by running the following
commands:</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-config.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-config.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev
7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-config.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev
7114)
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
these properly, you will notice a resolution much lower than desired.
The default <option>HorizSync</option> setting is 28-33kHz which is very
conservative. The default <option>VertRefresh</option> is 43-72Hz.
- Consult your monitor documentation or search on line for the proper
+ Consult your monitor documentation or search online for the proper
settings for your monitor.</para>
<para>It is also possible to control many detailed timing characteristics
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
or via a graphical interface such as <application>KDE</application>'s
Control Center.</para>
- <para>A typical monitor sections will normally look like:</para>
+ <para>A typical monitor section will normally look like:</para>
<screen><literal>Section "Monitor"
DisplaySize 400 300 # mm
Modified: trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x7server.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x7server.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev
7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x7server.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev
7114)
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
</note>
<para>A <ulink url='http://wiki.x.org/wiki/Development/Security'>security
- vulnerability</ulink> have been identified in the xorg-server
+ vulnerability</ulink> has been identified in the xorg-server
package. Apply a patch to fix this vulnerability with the following
command:</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnucash.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnucash.xml 2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnucash.xml 2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -76,7 +76,6 @@
<bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
<para role="required"><xref linkend="guile"/>,
<xref linkend="slib"/>,
- <xref linkend="libgnomeui"/>,
<xref linkend="goffice"/>, and
<xref linkend="gtkhtml"/></para>
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