Author: randy
Date: 2007-10-16 06:11:05 -0600 (Tue, 16 Oct 2007)
New Revision: 7115

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
Log:
Fixed a typo in the ChangeLog

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml       2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC 
(rev 7114)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml       2007-10-16 12:11:05 UTC 
(rev 7115)
@@ -45,8 +45,9 @@
       <para>October 16th, 2007</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[randy] - Fixed numerous typos, ommisions and corrections
-          by applying patches provided by Chris Staub. Thanks, Chris.</para>
+          <para>[randy] - Fixed numerous typos and ommisions, along with
+          several corrections by applying patches from Chris Staub. Thanks,
+          Chris.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[randy] - Updated the Evince instructions to reflect the

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