Author: chris
Date: 2009-09-25 04:52:41 -0600 (Fri, 25 Sep 2009)
New Revision: 8037
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/connect.xml
trunk/BOOK/book/whoread.xml
trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/building-notes.xml
trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/tripwire.xml
Log:
Grammar fixes
Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/connect.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/connect.xml 2009-09-25 08:27:48 UTC (rev
8036)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/connect.xml 2009-09-25 10:52:41 UTC (rev
8037)
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
subnet masks and routing information to computers. If your network uses
DHCP, you will need a DHCP client in order to connect to it.</para>
- <para>PPP stands for Point-to-Point Protocol. It is data link protocol
+ <para>PPP stands for Point-to-Point Protocol. It is a data link protocol
commonly used for establishing authenticated IP connections over
a phone line with a modem, or over radio waves with a cellular phone. There
is also a variant (PPPoE) that works over Ethernet and is used by cable
Modified: trunk/BOOK/book/whoread.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/book/whoread.xml 2009-09-25 08:27:48 UTC (rev 8036)
+++ trunk/BOOK/book/whoread.xml 2009-09-25 10:52:41 UTC (rev 8037)
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
you should also like this!</para>
<para>Since Release 5.0, the BLFS book version matches the LFS book version.
- This book may be incompatible with a previous or latter release of the LFS
+ This book may be incompatible with a previous or later release of the LFS
book.</para>
</sect1>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/building-notes.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/building-notes.xml 2009-09-25
08:27:48 UTC (rev 8036)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/building-notes.xml 2009-09-25
10:52:41 UTC (rev 8037)
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
<para>Finally, you sometimes need to be able to unpack patches which are
generally not in <filename class='extension'>.tar</filename> format. The
- best way to do this is to copy the patch file to parent of the 'build'
+ best way to do this is to copy the patch file to the parent of the 'build'
directory and then run one of the following commands depending on whether
the file is a <filename class='extension'>.gz</filename> or <filename
class='extension'>.bz2</filename> file:</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/tripwire.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/tripwire.xml 2009-09-25 08:27:48 UTC (rev
8036)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/tripwire.xml 2009-09-25 10:52:41 UTC (rev
8037)
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@
<para>After your policy file has been edited to your satisfaction you may
begin the configuration steps (perform as the <systemitem
- class='username'>root</systemitem>):</para>
+ class='username'>root</systemitem>) user:</para>
<screen role="root"><userinput>twadmin --create-polfile --site-keyfile
/etc/tripwire/site.key \
/etc/tripwire/twpol.txt &&
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@
<screen role="root"><userinput>tripwire --update --twrfile
/var/lib/tripwire/report/<replaceable><report-name.twr></replaceable></userinput></screen>
- <para>You will be placed into <application>vim</application> with a copy
+ <para>You will be placed into <application>Vim</application> with a copy
of the report in front of you. If all the changes were good, then just
type <command>:wq</command> and after entering your local key, the
database
will be updated. If there are files which you still want to be warned
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