Author: chris
Date: 2012-10-26 00:42:37 -0600 (Fri, 26 Oct 2012)
New Revision: 10791

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/aboutraid.xml
Log:
Text updates to RAID page

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/aboutraid.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/aboutraid.xml        2012-10-26 06:15:09 UTC 
(rev 10790)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/aboutraid.xml        2012-10-26 06:42:37 UTC 
(rev 10791)
@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@
   also allows for providing hardware maintenance without powering
   down the system.</para>
 
-  <para>The types of RAID organization are descrbed in the <ulink
-  
url="https://raid.wiki.kernel.org/articles/i/n/t/Introduction.html#The_RAID_levels";>
+  <para>The types of RAID organization are described in the <ulink
+  url="https://raid.wiki.kernel.org/index.php/Overview#The_RAID_levels";>
   RAID Wiki</ulink>.</para>
 
   <para>Note that while RAID provides protection against disk 
@@ -43,9 +43,9 @@
     available by the device manufacturer.  The capabilities are
     generally supplied via a PCI card, although there are some 
     instances of RAID components integrated in to the motherboard.
-    Hardware RAID may also be available ina sthand-alone enclosure.</para>
+    Hardware RAID may also be available in a stand-alone enclosure.</para>
 
-    <para>One advantage of hardware based RAID is that the drives
+    <para>One advantage of hardware-based RAID is that the drives
     are offered to the operating system as a logical drive and no
     operating system dependent configuration is needed.</para>
 
@@ -165,11 +165,11 @@
    etc).  The formatted partitions can then be mounted.  The
    <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> ifile can use the devices created for 
mounting at
    boot time and the linux command line in
-   <filename>/boot/grub/grub.conf</filename> can specify
+   <filename>/boot/grub/grub.cfg</filename> can specify
    <option>root=/dev/md1</option>.</para>
 
    <note><para>The swap devices should be specified in the 
<filename>/etc/fstab</filename>
-   file as normal.  The kernel normally stripes swap data accross multiple 
swap 
+   file as normal.  The kernel normally stripes swap data across multiple swap 
    files and should not be made part of a RAID array.</para></note>
 
    <para>For further options and management details of RAID devices, refer to
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@
 
    <para>Additional details for monitoring RAID arrays and dealing with
    problems can be found at the <ulink
-   url="https://raid.wiki.kernel.org/index.html";>Linux RAID
+   url="https://raid.wiki.kernel.org/index.php/Linux_Raid";>Linux RAID
    Wiki</ulink>.</para>
 
   </sect2>

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