Author: chris
Date: 2012-10-26 01:50:07 -0600 (Fri, 26 Oct 2012)
New Revision: 10792

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/apr.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/check.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/slang.xml
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/mdadm.xml
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/ntfs-3g.xml
Log:
Text updates

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/apr.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/apr.xml   2012-10-26 06:42:37 UTC (rev 10791)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/apr.xml   2012-10-26 07:50:07 UTC (rev 10792)
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
     <para>
-      <option>-&#45;disable-static</option>: This stops it compiling a static
+      <option>-&#45;disable-static</option>: This stops it from compiling a 
static
       version of <filename class="libraryfile">libapr-1</filename>.
     </para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/check.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/check.xml   2012-10-26 06:42:37 UTC (rev 10791)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/check.xml   2012-10-26 07:50:07 UTC (rev 10792)
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
 
     <para>
       <application>Check</application> is a unit testing framework for C.
-      It was installed by LFS in the temprary /tools directory. These
+      It was installed by LFS in the temporary /tools directory. These
       instructions install it permanently.
     </para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/slang.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/slang.xml   2012-10-26 06:42:37 UTC (rev 10791)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/slang.xml   2012-10-26 07:50:07 UTC (rev 10792)
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
     <title>Introduction to S-Lang</title>
 
     <para><application>S-Lang</application> is an interpreted language that
-    maybe be embedded into an application to make the application extensible.
+    may be embedded into an application to make the application extensible.
     It provides facilities required by interactive applications such as
     display/screen management, keyboard input and keymaps.</para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/mdadm.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/mdadm.xml    2012-10-26 06:42:37 UTC (rev 
10791)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/mdadm.xml    2012-10-26 07:50:07 UTC (rev 
10792)
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
     <title>Introduction to mdadm</title>
 
     <para>The <application>mdadm</application> package contains administration
-    tools for sorfware RAID.</para>
+    tools for software RAID.</para>
 
     &lfs72_checked;
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/ntfs-3g.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/ntfs-3g.xml  2012-10-26 06:42:37 UTC (rev 
10791)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/ntfs-3g.xml  2012-10-26 07:50:07 UTC (rev 
10792)
@@ -180,7 +180,8 @@
 
     <para>
       For a user to be able to mount the usb stick they will need to be able to
-      write to /mnt/usb so as the <systemitem 
class="username">root</systemitem>
+      write to <filename class="directory">/mnt/usb</filename>, so as the
+      <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>
       user:
     </para>
 

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