On 1/13/2013 4:01 AM, [email protected] wrote:
> Author: krejzi
> Log:
> Just some minor fixes - I prefer option when there is no '=' in a switch, 
> parameter when there is '=' in a switch. Also, I'd prefer not to use Oxford 
> comma when listing deps.
> -      <parameter>--disable-avahi</parameter>: This parameter is required if
> -      the <application>Avahi</application> package is not installed.
> +      <option>--disable-avahi</option>: This switch is required if
> +      the <application>Avahi</application> is not installed.
>       </para>

With all due respect, I have been editing this book for almost
10 years. Please do not modify my work for your liking. By the
way, the change you made is grammatically incorrect. I will fix
it.

Thanks,
Randy

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