Bruce Dubbs wrote:
OK. How about:
<para>In addition, the LFS Community has developed its own CD-ROM
available at <ulink url='http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/livecd/'/>.
This LiveCD, in addition to booting and having rescue capabilities,
this CD is capable of building an entire LFS/BLFS system.
A copy of this CD-ROM is available with the printed version of the Linux
From Scratch book. If you download the ISO image, use <xref
linkend='cdrecord'/> to copy the image to a CD-ROM.</para>
Yes, that's better... But what do you think if we:
sed -e 's/own CD-ROM/LiveCD/' -e 's/This LiveCD, in/In/' -e '/this CD/it/'
IOW:
<para>In addition, the LFS Community has developed its own LiveCD
available at <ulink url='http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/livecd/'/>. In
addition to booting and having rescue capabilities, it is capable of
building an entire LFS/BLFS system. A copy of this CD-ROM is available
with the printed version of the Linux From Scratch book. If you
download the ISO image, use <xref linkend='cdrecord'/> to copy the image
to a CD-ROM.</para>
Just seems to read better and covers all the bases. :)
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JH
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