Jeremy Huntwork wrote:
> Jeremy Huntwork wrote:
> 
>> <para>In addition, the LFS Community has developed its own LiveCD
>> available at <ulink url='http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/livecd/'/>.
>> In addition to booting and having rescue capabilities, it is capable
>> of building an entire LFS/BLFS system. A copy of this CD-ROM is
>> available with the printed version of the Linux From Scratch book.  If
>> you download the ISO image, use <xref linkend='cdrecord'/> to copy the
>> image to a CD-ROM.</para>
> 
> 
> Er.. just noticed that two sentences in a row begin with 'In addition'.
> Might want to find an alternative. :)

OK.  This is what I have now:

<para>Also, the LFS Community has developed its own LiveCD available at
<ulink url='http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/livecd/'/>.  This LiveCD, in
addition to having boot and rescue capabilities, is capable of building
an entire LFS/BLFS system.  A copy of this CD-ROM is available with the
printed version of the Linux From Scratch book.  If you download the ISO
image, use <xref linkend='cdrecord'/> to copy the image to a
CD-ROM.</para>

  -- Bruce
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