On Sun, 29 Jan 2006 18:49:21 -0600
Randy McMurchy <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

 Please, all, tear
> it apart and let me know where it needs fixing. 

I like it.  Apart from the personal touches, of course.  Does 'Cool,
huh?' translate into Russian, Chinese, English? Perhaps
'Impressive, don't you think?' might be better.

Also, most American style books say the the construct: clause 'which'
qualifying clause, is wrong and 'that' should be used.  However, 'which'
is perfectly correct in modern English.  (I hope I'm not being
unecessarily nit-picking here?)

Tongue firmly in cheek, BTW. 

R.

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