On 3/13/06, Bruce Dubbs <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
> I'd appreciate someone reviewing the changes and providing feedback.

I like the changes.  I think they make the whole thing clearer.  I do
remember being very confused when I first read the instructions some
time ago.  I think it's clearer now.

One nitpick that's just my opinion.  You have "In addition, the source
code cannot be downloaded to some countries."  This sounds unusual to
me, and I prefer "downloaded in some countries."

Otherwise, I like it.  Especially the Package Information section,
which is more informative.

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Dan
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