Hi :) I wouldn't worry about it. It's fine in "business speak". If you do change it then it needs to be more like ...
Each organization *can appoint* a single representative to the Advisory Board based on a yearly fee to be determined by the BoD. The problem then is that it's passive and business communications prefer things to sound active. Trying to make it perfect would make it excessively long without gaining anything. It makes sense enough as it is :) Regards from Tom :) ________________________________ From: Florian Effenberger <[email protected]> To: [email protected] Sent: Wed, 15 June, 2011 11:45:50 Subject: [steering-discuss] grammar mistake in the bylaws Hello, is there a slight grammar mistake in the bylaws? They read Each organization *appointing* a single representative to the Advisory Board based on a yearly fee to be determined by the BoD. but should rather be Each organization *appoints* a single representative to the Advisory Board based on a yearly fee to be determined by the BoD. Or am I mistaken? Florian -- Florian Effenberger <[email protected]> Steering Committee and Founding Member of The Document Foundation Tel: +49 8341 99660880 | Mobile: +49 151 14424108 Skype: floeff | Twitter/Identi.ca: @floeff -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.documentfoundation.org/www/steering-discuss/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.documentfoundation.org/www/steering-discuss/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
