On (01/15/08 16:09), Sebastien Roy wrote:
> 
> Here it is, it its full glory:
> 

thanks for going through this exercise! This looks very good. some
comments:


>       dladm show-ether [-p] [-o field,...] [name]

should be

        dladm show-ether [-px] [-o field,...] [name]

Also, some corrections to the strings printed out for:

>               PAUSE           Flow control information. Can be  ""
>                               (null  string)  indicating  no  flow
>                               control is available, tx  indicating
>                               that   the  end-point  can  transmit
>                               pause  frames,   but   ignores   any
>                               received pause frames, rx indicating
>                               that the end-point receives and acts
>                               upon  received pause frames, or both
>                               indicating   bi-directional    flow-
>                               control.

These should be

                PAUSE           Flow control information. Can be "no"
                                indicating  no  flow control is 
                                available, "tx"  indicating
                                that   the  end-point  can  transmit
                                pause  frames,   but   ignores   any
                                received pause frames, "rx" indicating
                                that the end-point receives and acts
                                upon  received pause frames, or "bi"
                                indicating   bi-directional    flow-
                                control.
  

>    General Link Property

should be "Properties", and include autopush here?

>       The following general link      property is supported:
            :
>    Ethernet Link Properties
>       The following MII Properties as documented  in  ieee802.3(5)
>       are supported in read-only mode:
             :
>       Each adv_ property (for example, adv_autoneg_cap) also has a
>       read/write   counterpart   enable_  property  (for  example,
>       enable_autoneg_cap)   controlling   parameters    used    at
>       autonegotiation.

s/enable/en, i.e., the prefix should be en_ so that this is


        "Each adv_ property (for example, adv_100fdx_cap) also has a
        read/write   counterpart   en_  property  (for  example,
        en_100fdx_cap)   controlling   parameters    used    at
        autonegotiation."

> SEE ALSO
>       ifconfig(1M), zonecfg(1M),      wpad(1M), attributes(5), dlpi(7P)

add ieee802.3(5) and ndd(1M) here.

--Sowmini


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