> The final set of updates based on comments from Meem and Jim:
 > 
 > http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/clearview/dladm-uv-brussels.1m.txt

 |    dev       A network device, identified by concatenation of a
 |              driver name and an instance number.
 |
 |    secobj    Secure     objects,     identified      by      an
 |              administratively-chosen alphanumeric name.

The definition for "secobj" above needs to follow parallel structure --
e.g., "A secure object, ".

 |    Some subcommands  require  a  specific  type  of  link.  For
 |    instance, the WiFi subcommands require a WiFi link. 

Is this bit still needed given the new naming conventions?

 |          Create a tagged VLAN link with an ID of "vid" over Ethernet
 |          link "ether-link".  The name of the VLAN link may be
 |          specified as "vlan-link".
 | 
 |          If the name is not specified, a name will be automatically
 |          generated (assuming that "ether-link" is <name><PPA>) as

The above two paragraphs could be merged.

 |        For example, if "ether-link" is bge1 and the VLAN ID is 2,
 |        the name generated will be "bge2001".

For consistency, s/VLAN ID/"vid"/

 |           VID
 |                 The VLAN ID associated with the VLAN.

s/VLAN ID/ID/ (to eliminate redundancy).

 | General Link Property
 | 
 |    The following general link property is supported:

Still needs to be made plural :-)

-- 
meem

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