Peter Memishian wrote: > > The final set of updates based on comments from Meem and Jim: > > > > http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/clearview/dladm-uv-brussels.1m.txt > > | dev A network device, identified by concatenation of a > | driver name and an instance number. > | > | secobj Secure objects, identified by an > | administratively-chosen alphanumeric name. > > The definition for "secobj" above needs to follow parallel structure -- > e.g., "A secure object, ".
Fixed. > > | Some subcommands require a specific type of link. For > | instance, the WiFi subcommands require a WiFi link. > > Is this bit still needed given the new naming conventions? No, good point. I've removed it. > > | Create a tagged VLAN link with an ID of "vid" over Ethernet > | link "ether-link". The name of the VLAN link may be > | specified as "vlan-link". > | > | If the name is not specified, a name will be automatically > | generated (assuming that "ether-link" is <name><PPA>) as > > The above two paragraphs could be merged. Done. > > | For example, if "ether-link" is bge1 and the VLAN ID is 2, > | the name generated will be "bge2001". > > For consistency, s/VLAN ID/"vid"/ Fixed. > > | VID > | The VLAN ID associated with the VLAN. > > s/VLAN ID/ID/ (to eliminate redundancy). Fixed. > > | General Link Property > | > | The following general link property is supported: > > Still needs to be made plural :-) Doh! The document has been updated. Thanks, -Seb
