This new website is great - much more polished and professional! I particularly like the essay on automated engraving, the colourful "LilyPond crash course", and the tidier navigation system.
I've just taken half an hour to do some rough proofreading for spelling and grammar, hope you don't mind... * general Is there supposed to be // in all the URLs? pedantic: a few missing full stops / punctuation at end of lines, and inconsistently "inside." or "outside". quotes! * http://lilypond.org/web/switch/ machines may be mechanic -> machines may be mechanical we started writing programming -> we started writing this program too much white space between the header and the paragraph (are you sure about putting the "the name is Pond" thing on the front page? A bit cheesy but I don't immediately have a better idea!) * http://lilypond.org/web//about/faq.html mimick -> mimic terms GNU GPL -> Terms of the GNU General Public Licence (with web link to the GPL?) results in mechanical look -> results in a mechanical appearance rendered as a PNG images -> rendered as PNG images converting 1.8 to 2.0 files needs overseeing. -> converting 1.8 to 2.0 files will need overseeing. (? 2.0 isn't out yet!) * http://lilypond.org/web//about/ Interested in backgrounds? -> Interested in the background theory? with Linux Audio Developers group. -> with the Linux Audio Developers group. Linx -> Linux in alt tag * http://lilypond.org/web//about/features.html builting Scheme interpreter -> built-in Scheme interpreter should be more space between "PostScript output..." and "Conforms..." * http://lilypond.org/web//about/thanks.html Graham Parcival -> Graham Percival * http://lilypond.org/web//devel/participating/localization.html gramatically and stylishly -> grammatically and stylishly it is preferrable -> it is preferable Spurious paragraph breaks: for the same<p> situation, better to <p> translate a whole message -- chris _______________________________________________ Bug-lilypond mailing list [EMAIL PROTECTED] http://mail.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/bug-lilypond
