Hi Barbara,

Here are some comments on the AI docs.


MAN PAGE
---------
Under SYNOPSIS:
installadm help subcommand -> installadm help [subcommand]

Under DESCRIPTION:
As part of this process, the installadm utility enables users
->
To enable this process, the installadm utility allows users

Under SUBCOMMANDS
For create-service -i:
The IP addresses, starting from ip_address_start
-> 
The IP addresses, starting from dhcp_address_start

For create-service -c:
value of the number_of_ip_addresses -> value of count_of_ipaddr
and
ip_address_start -> dhcp_ip_start

For create-service -s:
images -> image

For create-client:
add -b option to command line:
[-b "property=value"]

-b <property>=<value>
Optional: Set a property value  in  the  client-specific menu.lst file
in /tftpboot.  Use  this option to set boot properties that are
specific to this client.

Under Example 2, you can add:
The service, myservice, and image, myimage, should already exist.

The output informs the user that the boot file, has been copied to
/tftpboot and that the DHCP table has been updated with the
appropriate PXE boot information.

ATTRIBUTES section:
- SUNWinstalladm package --> SUNWinstalladm-tools package
- /usr/man/man.1m/aainstall.1m --> /usr/man/man1m/installadm.1m



INSTALLER GUIDE
---------------
p7 - says "two kinds of manifest files are provided", but then lists three

p8
- install server that can server -> install server that can serve
-containing the automated installer application -> containing the 
installadm application

p14 - "sli" -> "slim_install"

p20,under installadm list:
Without this option, the installadm list lists -> Without this option, 
installadm list lists

p21 -add "-b" option as indicated in above comments for man page

p21 - Syntax for installadm help is cut/pasted from installadm 
delete-client but
still says "delete-client"

p25 - under /tmp/image2:
creates the new service -> creates the new image

p26 sample menu.lst
install_media and install_boot should both start off as: 
http://135.134.0.0:5555/export/opensolaris/.....

Thanks,
Sue



> Install gang,
>
> This is the final review for the Automated Installer documentation
> and the Distribution Constructor documentation before I deliver
> these documents this Friday, 11/14. Thank you for all the edits
> I received to date!
>
> Please send me your final edits ASAP.
>
> - I will continue to make edits this week, but
> I may need to postpone some revisions until a later delivery, if
> time runs out.
>
> - For the AI article, I will be adding more material this week from
> Sundar and other
> engineers about the criteria manifest and more, as time permits.
>
> - Does the DC team have a final manifest file with comments done?
>
> AI man page:
> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/installadm.1m.txt
>
> AI article:
> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/AIinstallNearFinal.pdf
>
> DC man page:
> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/distro_const.1m.txt
>
> DC article:
> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/DistroConstNearFinal.pdf
>
> Thanks in advance!
> Barbara
>
>
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