Glenn Lagasse wrote: > Hi Clay, > > * Clay Baenziger (clayb at sun.com) wrote: > >> Hi all, >> I've updated the gate README to be friendlier to someone just picking >> up >> our code. The updated information is also desired for providing RE source >> drops. Can someone please review my 13 lines of change to ensure I didn't >> overlook anything goofy. >> Webrev: http://cr.opensolaris.org/~clayb/readme_changes/ >> Bug: http://defect.opensolaris.org/bz/show_bug.cgi?id=9028 >> > > Line 46: nightly is now available in IPS via the SUNWonbld package. > > Line 51: I'm not sure this is still needed with currently nightly > > Cheers, > > Line 43: "This can be gotten" sounds awkward. I'd suggest "Run the command ---" or "You can get this package by running ---"
Line 46: Similar comment. -Keith
