Hi Glenn and Keith,
I've updated the webrev with your suggestions and a few other
notices Ginnie gave me in person. Please see:
http://cr.opensolaris.org/~clayb/readme_changes2/
Thank you,
Clay
On Tue, 19 May 2009, Keith Mitchell wrote:
> Glenn Lagasse wrote:
>> Hi Clay,
>>
>> * Clay Baenziger (clayb at sun.com) wrote:
>>
>>> Hi all,
>>> I've updated the gate README to be friendlier to someone just picking
>>> up our code. The updated information is also desired for providing RE
>>> source drops. Can someone please review my 13 lines of change to ensure I
>>> didn't overlook anything goofy.
>>> Webrev: http://cr.opensolaris.org/~clayb/readme_changes/
>>> Bug: http://defect.opensolaris.org/bz/show_bug.cgi?id=9028
>>>
>>
>> Line 46: nightly is now available in IPS via the SUNWonbld package.
>>
>> Line 51: I'm not sure this is still needed with currently nightly
>>
>> Cheers,
>>
>>
> Line 43: "This can be gotten" sounds awkward. I'd suggest "Run the command
> ---" or "You can get this package by running ---"
>
> Line 46: Similar comment.
>
> -Keith
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