Ethan Quach wrote:
> Evan,
> 
> These are mostly just nits ...
> 
> 65 - Can't you use INSTALLED_ROOT_DIR instead of defining INST_MNTPT?

Yes. I've removed INST_MNTPT and used INSTALLED_ROOT_DIR n it's place.

> 
> 566 - "Installer build version: " ?

Sounds better.

> 
> 1584 - "Target build version: " ?

Sounds better.

> 
> 2970 - "from" -> "of an image root path using the output of"

Sounds much better.

> 
> 2973 - This sounds like you already know who's going to be calling
>           this function, and with what.
>           Suggest: "The image root path to check"

changed.

> 
> 3014,3021,3022 - need (void)

Not needed not that I've changed this based on Karen's comments.

> 
> 3032 - Does it have to be two lines?  Why not just "%s %s\n"

No it doesn't have to be two line it just seemed easier to read when I was 
looking at the output. I can definitely change this it it seems to make more 
sense.

I've updated thew webrev with everyone's comments so far...

Thanks!
-evan

> 
> 
> thanks,
> -ethan
> 
> 
> Evan Layton wrote:
>> I need two reviewers for:
>>
>> 7838 Log installer build number and installed software build number in 
>> install_log
>> http://defect.opensolaris.org/bz/show_bug.cgi?id=7838
>>
>> and
>>
>> 6810 AI image missing D-Trace toolkit
>> http://defect.opensolaris.org/bz/show_bug.cgi?id=6810
>>
>> Webrev:
>>
>> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~evanl/7838/
>>
>>
>> I've tested this with both an AI and slim CD image and get the proper 
>> output.
>>
>> In the log you'll see lines similar to:
>> <OM Apr 15 19:14:09> Install running on:
>>
>>           FMRI: pkg:/entire at 0.5.11,5.11-0.111:20090331T092149Z
>>
>> and
>>
>> <OM Apr 15 19:40:42> System installed with:
>>
>>           FMRI: pkg:/entire at 0.5.11,5.11-0.111:20090415T070733Z
>>
>>
>> Thanks,
>> -evan
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