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SuccessNet Strategies: Ideas, Inspiration, Resources and Insights to help you live and work more effectively. Volume 9, Issue 11.3 - November 11, 2004 U.S. Library of Congress, ISSN: 1529-3378 Published by Michael Angier and SuccessNet ------------------------------------------- We send this publication only to those who have requested it. We don't sell, rent or give out our mailing lists. If you find this newsletter to be of value, we invite and encourage you to forward it to your friends. ------------------------------------------- In This Issue: Word count: 1,217, estimated reading time: 6.6 minutes :: Featured Articles :: 16 Tips for Becoming a Better Writer :: Featured Freebies :: Featured Product/Service :: Feedback & Contributions :: Classifieds ------------------------------------------- If you have problems with paragraph alignment, try making your window wider. 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Read article at . . . http://Successnet.org/articles/cook-objections.htm <A href="http://Successnet.org/articles/cook-objections.htm">Objections</A> Perf�rmance Reviews, by Michael Angier Professional relationships, like personal relationships are built on trust and clear communication. Learn how to effectively give and receive feedback from your team. Read article at . . . http://Successnet.org/articles/angier-performancereviews.htm <A href="http://Successnet.org/articles/angier-performancereviews.htm">Perf�rmance Reviews</A> 16 Tips for Becoming a Better Writer, by Michael Angier Based on the positive response to last week's article on checklists, we decided to resurrect this very popular article. Although it's not actually a "checklist", it's a quick reminder of ways to make your writing more effective. Read article below or online at . . . http://SuccessNet.org/articles/angier-writingtips.htm <A href="http://SuccessNet.org/articles/angier-writingtips.htm">Tips for Better Writing</A> For other recent articles, visit http://SuccessNet.org/home.htm ------------------------------------------- 16 Tips for Becoming a Better Writer, by Michael Angier Whether you're writing a memo, a letter, an article or a full- length novel, there are a few basic rules to keep in mind that will help your message first to be read and then to be better understood and accepted. 1. Nev�r Be Boring Your reader will forgive almost anything except you being boring. They don't have to agree with you, but they should at least be intrigued. Make the reader care. Don't be afraid to be "edgy." Look at every sentence and ask yourself, "Why will they care about this?" 2. Write in Short Sentences The reader shouldn't have to work hard to understand what you're saying. If they have to go back over a sentence because of poor structure, it's not their fault, it's yours. Read what you've written aloud or have someone else read it aloud to look for sentences that are too long or convoluted. 3. Write TO the Reader Use "you" often. Look for ways to eliminate or reduce "I" and "me". Present tense, second person is always best. It feels more to the reader like you're talking to THEM. 4. Go Active Use active verbs as much as possible. They're more engaging. They move the reader along and take fewer words to get your message across. "John loves Mary" is much more powerful than "Mary is loved by John." 5. Keep it Simple The front page of The Wall Street Journal and all of USA Today is written for the eighth grade reading level. Why should we be any different? People aren't interested in things they don't understand. Make your points quickly and succinctly. Make your words work and use as few of them as possible. You want to use the right word, but make sure you're using it because it's the right word and not just to show off your vocabulary--or your new thesaurus. 6. Tell Stories Facts tell and stories sell. The best writers and speakers of the world have always been good story tellers. Your own stories are the best. What you're sharing is wisdom from your point of view, and stories can illustrate this better than anything else. 7. Know Your Subject Write on things on which you've earned the right to write. Know 100 times more about your subject than you write about, but don't write about all of it. The more you know, the more confidence--and credibility--you'll have. 8. WIFM This is the radio station that everyone listens to. The call letters stand for What's in It For Me. People want to know what they'll get out of what you're writing. Appeal to what they want. 9. Write Like You Talk Or at least the way you'd LIKE to talk. Too many times, I see people who are good verbal communicators try to put on a different air in their writing. It doesn't work. It's much better to be conversational. 10. Paint Pictures We think in pictures and should write in ways that create these pictures in the mind of the reader. Be descriptive. Use examples. Describe the unfamiliar by using some of the familiar. "Jennifer's first day at her new job reminded her of the freshness and unfamiliarity she experienced on her first day of school." 11. Sleep On it It's a rare individual who can sit down and write something well at the first attempt. Any writing of import should be written and then reviewed later--preferably at least a day later. Some things should be edited several times over an extended period of time. 12. Write and Read Extensively This advice is from Stephen King--a prolific writer. If you want to be a good writer, you have to do two things--read a lot and write a lot. Enough said. 13. Break it Down Where appropriate, use bullet points. Use them for summaries or outlines. Think about someone who may only start out by scanning your text. Let your bullet points draw the reader in. A Few Added Points for Email Writing 14. Keep your lines 60-65 characters maximum. A column thats too wide taxes the eyes of the reader and appears overwhelming. 15. Keep paragraphs to no more than six lines. Short paragraphs provide white space to the text. They break up the page and make it appear less formidable to the reader. As in music, the space between the notes is as important as the notes themselves. 16. Don't use all caps. Capital letters are harder to read than upper and lower case. They also can be perceived as SHOUTING! A little uppercase usage is OK--using all caps doesn't work and looks amateurish. ------------------------------------------- "The greatest joys of life are happy memories. 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