get to the things I think could use improvement.
The home page seems poorly balanced. It's particularly odd on a large
screen, but even when I resize down to the content it still feels like
the space is poorly arranged. The interior layout is okay, but I'd
consider not craming it up against the edge. I'd probably let if float
horizontally in the center of the space.
I'm not a big fan of the typeface. You could keep it for the "McClure
Photography" wordmark, but I would choose something else for the other
type.
I notice that the three pictures at the top of each page are randomly
selected. IMO, if you care about your portfolio, you will care about
how the pictures are selected and displayed. They aren't just three
separate photos. They create a visual tryptic and create tenion or
harmony as a group Quite often I would get pictures that just didn't
work together. Whether it was something like [B/W | B/W | Color] or
[Wideshot | Closeup | Closeup] or two pictures that were obviously
from the same event and one from another or photos with too even or
too conflicting of tonality.
And of course, I have to add the obligatory jab about using sliced
table layout instead of being one of the cool kids and using CSS
positioning. ;-)
-Kevin
On Wed, 11 Aug 2004 13:52:02 -0400, Nick McClure
<[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> http://mcclure.king-nacho.com <http://mcclure.king-nacho.com/>
>
> So I have been working a new website for my photography stuff, what do you
> guys think? Still need to add content but I wanted to get an idea about what
> others thought about the design and how it seems to flow.
>
> TIA
>
> --
>
> Nick
>
>
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