Tony,
Looks really good, but there are a couple of tweaks you might want to
consider:
* There isn't enough contrast between the light blue background and the thin
white type for my old eyes to see it clearly. Perhaps a 75% opacity dark
blue drop shadow with a very small offset might pop it a bit better.
* Perhaps flattening-out the address block at the bottom of the screen might
save you some vertical real estate and not draw so much attention to such a
secondary item. Maybe lightening its type as well would work better.
* Perhaps make the donations link in the upper right corner medium green
("forest green"). My old eyes are losing it against the white background.
But overall the design really is a winner, Tony. Nice and clean, draws
attention well.
Good job.
Respectfully,
Adam Phillip Churvis
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----- Original Message -----
From: "Tony Weeg" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: "CF-Community" <[email protected]>
Sent: Thursday, April 07, 2005 11:08 PM
Subject: site critique
> hola mi peoples.
>
> if ya have time, and can check out a layout...
>
> http://www.revolutionwebdesign.com/clients/unitedway/interface_idea.jpg
>
> gratzie!
>
> --
> tony
>
> Tony Weeg
>
> macromedia certified coldfusion mx developer
> email: tonyweeg [at] gmail [dot] com
> blog: http://www.revolutionwebdesign.com/blog/
> cool tool: http://www.antiwrap.com
>
> "...straight cash homey"
> - randy moss, now a raider
>
>
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