Well, first off, I generally think of an "objective" section as the part that tells what kind of position I'm looking for - not what I've done. (By the way, there are grammatical issues with that section, too.)
There's little consistency in your style of writing. For example, for one job you state: Site design for the Morel Hunters! A Nebraska based morel Supply Company. For the next you say: Did a site for a Cincinnati, OH catering company. Maintain the same "voice" for each of your items. I'd say something more to the effect of the following (which is totally off the top of my head and not word-smithed and just made up); -- Morel Hunters Designed and developed promotional website for local non-profit organization. Utilized Macromedia Fireworks to create brand-specific graphics. Leveraged javascript, xhtml, and ColdFusion to create a central Ohio portal for morel hunters. -- In other words, start each phrase with an action word of some sort - and be consistent about it. (By the way, morelhunters.com <http://morelhunters.com>just goes to a godaddy park page.) I don't think that most people care about the number of hours you spent doing a site. I think they care about the steps you used. For example: Utilized client interviews, use case studies, wireframing and prototyping to architect multi-tier site, including administrative back-end controls and front-end marketing materials. Get the idea? On 10/17/05, Paul Ihrig <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > hey guys. > i have now been asked by two separate head hunters for a more > comprehensive resume. > right now i have the old ones up at http://paulihrig.com - click resume > > i have no idea how to put in more detail. > i mean i know i have done a ton of crud at different employers. > but other then saying i did a site in cf, php or jsp i just dont know > how to sell my self... > > any ideas or suggestions? > thanks > -paul > > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~| Find out how CFTicket can increase your company's customer support efficiency by 100% http://www.houseoffusion.com/banners/view.cfm?bannerid=49 Message: http://www.houseoffusion.com/lists.cfm/link=i:5:177254 Archives: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/threads.cfm/5 Subscription: http://www.houseoffusion.com/lists.cfm/link=s:5 Unsubscribe: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/unsubscribe.cfm?user=11502.10531.5 Donations & Support: http://www.houseoffusion.com/tiny.cfm/54
