camden avenue is probably the oldest and has some of the most beautiful old
houses in salisbury.

VERY steeped in history, camden avenue is.  while in college,
i lived in a house, from the 1900's that had some old
prohibition era "still" looking thing in it :) behind a bricked wall
in the basement!

tw

On 2/13/06, Dawson, Michael <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> If possible, I would change the rentals image to show the end of the
> rental storage unit, where the doors are.  The current pic sort of looks
> like another dumpster to the right.
>
> The development pic is not telling me the whole story, either.  What
> would be cool would be an aerial view of a new housing complex with
> in-process building and landscaping in the same pic.
>
> To me, development is not just construction, nor just landscaping, but
> more than what the current picture implies.
>
> The dozer, in the Demolition pic, is not demolishing anything.  It is
> only pushing dirt and duplicates the feel of the dump truck in the
> excavation pic.
>
> You need to show a building, of some sorts, that is being razed.  A
> wrecking ball would be a good tie to demolition.
>
> But, I like the whole layout of the home page.
>
> Secondary page:
>
> The first thing I noticed was the phone numbers listed with pre- and
> post-bullets.  Those confused my eyes and I tried to find a "list" that
> was delimited by the bullets and it slowed me down.
>
> On the demolition page: "4-story" should be "four-story".
>
> On the secondary page, you have a gold background bar with top and
> bottom borders.  It would be cool if you could use a border that looked
> more like a dump truck tire.  Something to tie it in with the feel of
> the company.  Maybe you could make a subtle change for each section to
> make the border look like the current page's topic.
>
> I also didn't know they named a street after Ray Camden.
>
> M!ke
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Tony [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> Sent: Monday, February 13, 2006 7:30 AM
> To: CF-Community
> Subject: design critique
>
> ok.
>
> here is the revised flash interface/splash and then you can click on a
> section to get to the content page layout to follow:
>
> http://www.bennett-construction.com/new
>
> let me know whatcha think.
>
> thanks!
> tw
>
>
>
> 

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