For me the first cognative clash is the name revolution and the cloverleaf logo.
The logo looks like a fan blade, which makes the name lean towards the definition of revolution meaning a circular motion. But the fan blade has no elements of movement or motion in the image. Which makes me feel a POTENTIAL for motion that is not being realized. Which leaves me with a deep unease. I would prefer a logo or treatment that leaves a little wiggle room in the definition of Revolution. Something that imlies changes as well as rotation. I agree its all too soft. Even for whimpy female-type-ka-niggits. On 3/13/06, Tony <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > well, i just wanted to throw together a new, more eye pleasing design, > and appeal to a different audience. truly, not one single sale has come > from the site, but everytime someone asks me about my site > and sites that I have done, i want to show them something that i am proud > of, that is good design, that has a nice easy to read list of > services, and clients > and things i can do. > > and i think this will accomplish that. > > tim: > take the "me" away from this design and dont think this is supps to be a > design > that reflects me, or anything about me, its supps to reflect a design company > that can take care of your every web need. > > tw > > > > > On 3/13/06, Deanna Schneider <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > It _is_ very soft and feminine - which isn't necessarily a bad thing if > > you're wanting to attract the crowd that's afraid of technology. > > > > The links in the top right are too squished - they need some space above and > > below each line. Also, I wouldn't include a beta lab in a marketing site. > > I'm assuming this is a marketing site. A beta lab is great for a technical > > audience - but your run of the mill customers aren't going to know what it > > is. So, the beta lab idea contradicts the soft approach. Which way are you > > trying to go? > > > > On 3/12/06, Tony <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > > > > hi there. > > > > > > working on a new site for my own business. finally its time > > > > > > whatcha think? > > > > > > http://www.revolutionwebdesign.com/interface_begin_3_12_2006.jpg > > > > > > the blue line @ the top will extend out in all directions, and the content > > > area > > > will take up 750 px of space, and it will be a center oriented design. > > > > > > anyway, hit me. > > > > > > tw > > > > > > > > > > > > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~| Message: http://www.houseoffusion.com/lists.cfm/link=i:5:199749 Archives: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/threads.cfm/5 Subscription: http://www.houseoffusion.com/lists.cfm/link=s:5 Unsubscribe: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/unsubscribe.cfm?user=11502.10531.5 Donations & Support: http://www.houseoffusion.com/tiny.cfm/54
