> Dana wrote: > there is a place where you have "there" that should be "their".
Lots of spelling and grammatical errors like this sentence: "By taking his designs and creating a photo album so that he can quickly get his images to the publishing community." That doesn't make any sense. There are also places where you use the wrong tense, e.g., "create" instead of "created". Also your objective is a summary, not an objective. Which, BTW, should effectively answer the question of what you want to do with your career and give a hint of where you see yourself in 5 years. What do you want? Are you a heads down coder who works alone in the dark or do you like teams or are you looking for more of an architect role or would you like to move into management? etc. etc. Do you want to learn new tech? be a trainer? I could go on and on :) A few sentences in your objective should tell me where you fit into my team. I'd also take out words and phrases like "highly functional" which doesn't mean anything and put in lots of action word and phrases like, "I delivered ..." Numbers are good too - anyplace you can say you delivered "on-time" or "ahead of delivery date" and "under budget by x%", etc is very helpful. Your experience should say that you can do what I need you to do because you've done it and can prove it. You should show how you take things you haven't done before, figured them out, and delivered them on time and on budget. I should feel comfortable that you can fill a hole on my team, and come up to speed quickly and cheaply. I need you productive in a week: we've got a big project here with a diverse cross-functional team that hasn't worked together before. I'm thinking you might work well as the dev team lead, but ... your resume doesn't tell me if you could handle that or not. And if it did, I don't know if you'd want too. (just an example, of the audience you might want to write for) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~| Create robust enterprise, web RIAs. Upgrade & integrate Adobe Coldfusion MX7 with Flex 2 http://ad.doubleclick.net/clk;56760587;14748456;a?http://www.adobe.com/products/coldfusion/flex2/?sdid=LVNU Archive: http://www.houseoffusion.com/groups/CF-Community/message.cfm/messageid:224465 Subscription: http://www.houseoffusion.com/groups/CF-Community/subscribe.cfm Unsubscribe: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/unsubscribe.cfm?user=11502.10531.5
