it's functional. It doesn't quite meet their needs. And yes, the text could
be better.

On 9/1/07, Robert Rawlins - Think Blue <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
wrote:
>
> I'm not sure what's going on with this, but the first link you sent over
> worked just fine for me. :-D
>
> I was pleasantly surprised by the site, it really is quite nice as it is.
> If
> I had things my way I might pull the front end apart a little bit and
> rebuild it using CSS and make everything valid, also look at getting some
> accessibility approval by the W3C WAI or something along those lines.
>
> I also notice the whole thing is quite text intensive, especially that
> first
> page, it's a real slap in the face and might well detour people from
> reading
> further, the front page should really be focused around gaining the users
> initial interest, then allow them to explore in their own time to fine
> answers to their questions.
>
> I also don't know how their SEO works, it might be worth spending a bit of
> time putting consideration in to that, with these kind of non profit
> making
> organisations, raising their profile in the public eye is always of great
> value to them.
>
> It might also be worth looking at what other charities and organisations
> such as this are doing to promote themselves on the web, sort of like an
> eBumperSticker scheme where people can add a footer to their site simply
> to
> help promote the organisation, or perhaps one of those 'make poverty
> history' style javascript bands which run in the top corner of the page?
> Like this... http://www.makepovertyhistory.org/getinvolved/banners.shtml
> ..... just a thought.
>
> My few cents Dana, not sure if those were the kinds of suggestions you
> were
> after, but hey! Worth a shot.
>
> Rob
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Dana [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> Sent: 01 September 2007 16:49
> To: CF-Community
> Subject: Re: suggestions for site
>
> what the hell. No kidding. Take two:
>
> http://208.112.112.99/
>
>
> On 9/1/07, Zaphod Beeblebrox <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> >
> > I would change the home page.  I wasn't able to understand anything
> > they're about by this:
> >
> > 500
> >
> > ROOT CAUSE:
> > com.seefusion.SeeFusionKillError: SeeFusion terminated request: Page
> > Time at 50485ms >= limit of 50000ms (rule "latentpages")
> >        at com.seefusion.ud.e(ud.java:338)
> >        at com.seefusion.uc.a(uc.java:431)
> >        at com.seefusion.uc.c(uc.java:402)
> >        at com.seefusion.uc.a(uc.java:208)
> >        at com.seefusion.ze.a(ze.java:38)
> >        at com.seefusion.ge.a(ge.java:41)
> >        at com.seefusion.vd.a(vd.java:295)
> >        at com.seefusion.vd.run(vd.java:281)
> >        at java.lang.Thread.run(Thread.java:619)
> >
> >
> > javax.servlet.ServletException: ROOT CAUSE:
> > com.seefusion.SeeFusionKillError: SeeFusion terminated request: Page
> > Time at 50485ms >= limit of 50000ms (rule "latentpages")
> >        at com.seefusion.ud.e(ud.java:338)
> >        at com.seefusion.uc.a(uc.java:431)
> >        at com.seefusion.uc.c(uc.java:402)
> >        at com.seefusion.uc.a(uc.java:208)
> >        at com.seefusion.ze.a(ze.java:38)
> >        at com.seefusion.ge.a(ge.java:41)
> >        at com.seefusion.vd.a(vd.java:295)
> >        at com.seefusion.vd.run(vd.java:281)
> >        at java.lang.Thread.run(Thread.java:619)
> >
> >        at coldfusion.monitor.event.MonitoringServletFilter.doFilter(
> > MonitoringServletFilter.java:70)
> >        at coldfusion.bootstrap.BootstrapFilter.doFilter(
> > BootstrapFilter.java:46)
> >        at jrun.servlet.FilterChain.doFilter(FilterChain.java:94)
> >        at jrun.servlet.FilterChain.service(FilterChain.java:101)
> >        at jrun.servlet.ServletInvoker.invoke(ServletInvoker.java:106)
> >        at jrun.servlet.JRunInvokerChain.invokeNext(JRunInvokerChain.java
> > :42)
> >        at jrun.servlet.JRunRequestDispatcher.invoke(
> > JRunRequestDispatcher.java:284)
> >        at jrun.servlet.ServletEngineService.dispatch(
> > ServletEngineService.java:543)
> >        at jrun.servlet.jrpp.JRunProxyService.invokeRunnable(
> > JRunProxyService.java:203)
> >        at jrunx.scheduler.ThreadPool$DownstreamMetrics.invokeRunnable(
> > ThreadPool.java:320)
> >        at jrunx.scheduler.ThreadPool$ThreadThrottle.invokeRunnable(
> > ThreadPool.java:428)
> >        at jrunx.scheduler.ThreadPool$UpstreamMetrics.invokeRunnable(
> > ThreadPool.java:266)
> >        at jrunx.scheduler.WorkerThread.run(WorkerThread.java:66)
> >
> >
> > On 9/1/07, Dana <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > > doh! It was late ;)
> > >
> > > http://www.raisethenation.org/
> > >
> > > On 9/1/07, C. Hatton Humphrey <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > I've been asked to help fix a site for a small local non-profit. I
> > am
> > > > > compiling a list of things it needs pro bono and would appreciate
> > any
> > > > > thoughts thta you guys might have,
> > > >
> > > > You forgot the link, Dana ;)
> > > >
> > > >
> > >
> > >
> >
> >
>
>
>
> 

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