Hello Alison,

Some (ended up quite a lot) comments.  Any discussion of this lot could well 
descend into chaos.  Could I suggest that responses are made separately to each 
of the 11 numbered comments so we end up with 11 threads that individually 
stand some chance of closure. 

(1) I don't understand what the definition of picophytoplankton (carbon 
concentration from the picophytoplankton (<2 um; < 5um) component alone) means  
Does it mean cells between 2 and 5 um in size, in which case it should be 
expressed as 2-5um, or does it mean something else?

(2) 
'mole_concentration_of_miscellaneous_phytoplankton_expressed_as_carbon_in_sea_water'
 is a very imprecise term that I think needs specifying more precisely.  Once 
the definition is tightened up finding a better phrase for the Standard Name 
should be possible. Likewise for 
'mole_concentration_of_miscellaneous_zooplankton_expressed_as_carbon_in_sea_water',
 ' 
mass_concentration_of_miscellaneous_phytoplankton_expressed_as_chlorophyll_in_sea_water',
 .

(3) 'mole_concenration_of_dissolved_iron_in_sea_water'.  Besides the typo 
(concentration), does this refer to iron in all oxidation states (Fe2+/Fe3+) 
and chemical environments.  If so, calling it 'total iron' might be better.

(4) There are a number of standard names for elemental concentrations in the 
particulate phase where the long names are very familiar to me, but the 
Standard Names seem counter-intuitive, such as ' 
mole_concentration_of_particulate_organic_matter_expressed_as_nitrogen_in_sea_water'
 for the parameter commonly known as particulate organic nitrogen or more 
usually PON.  I guess what is bugging me is that the standard name describes 
the primary quantity as the suspended particulate material (SPM) concentration, 
whereas in fact the chemical composition of the SPM is of at least equal 
importance.

(5) I have much deeper rooted problems with ' 
tendency_of_mole_concentration_of_organic_carbon_in_sea_water_due_to_net_primary_production'
 for primary production.  In a nutshell, the process of primary production 
involves the transition of primarily inorganic carbon in the dissolved phase 
into organic carbon in the particulate phase (in the form of plant cells).  The 
standard name gives no indication that the organic carbon quantity change is in 
the particulate phase.  At the very least I think we need 
'tendency_of_mole_concentration_of_particulate_organic_carbon_in_sea_water_due_to_net_primary_production',
 which with the existing syntax form would in fact become ' 
tendency_of_mole_concentration_of_particulate_organic_matter_expressed_as_carbon_in_sea_water_due_to_net_primary_production'.
 Ditto for new production, biogenic iron production and biogenic silica 
production, but this doesn't apply to calcite and aragonite which are be 
definition part of the particulate phase being
  crystalline forma of calcium carbonate. Also affects primary production by 
phytoplankton groups such as diatoms (lines 53-57 of the spreadsheet). 
  
(6) I now see, 'sinking_mole_flux_of_particulate_organic_carbon_in_sea_water', 
which if for consistency with the POC standard name would need to be 
'sinking_mole_flux_of_ 
particulate_organic_matter_expressed_as_carbon_in_sea_water'. Personally, I 
much prefer 'particulate_organic_carbon'.

(7) 
'tendency_of_mole_concentration_of_dissolved_iron_in_sea_water_due_to_scavenging_by_particles'
 should be ' 
tendency_of_mole_concentration_of_dissolved_iron_in_sea_water_due_to_scavenging_by_inorganic_particles'.
  'particles' could easily be taken to include plankton.  Similarly for ' 
tendency_of_mole_concentration_of_dissolved_iron_in_sea_water_due_to_dissolution_from_particles'.

(8) When we come to integrated primary production the standard name syntax 
becomes ' net_primary_mole_productivity_of_carbon' instead of 
'net_tendency_of_mole_concentration_of_particulate_organic_carbon_in_sea_water_due_to_net_primary_production'
 (which in itself needs revising: see above). I'm not sure how comfortable 
biogeochemists would be with the use of 'net' to signify depth integration.  
'net' tends to have other meanings such as the result of competing processes 
like photosynthesis and respiration in oxygen budgets.  I would much prefer 
'depth_integrated'.  

(9) When we come to 
'tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_iron_due_to_biological_production', there is 
no indication at all that the quantity is depth integrated.  Ditto for lines 
75-78, 86, 95-106.

(10) 'surface_downward_mass_flux_of_carbon_dioxide_expressed_as_carbon' doesn't 
indicate to me the that it's a flux from atmosphere to water body that's 
involved.  It could equally well be a chemical flux between two layers of the 
atmosphere, or is 'surface' explicitly defined as the ocean/atmosphere 
interface?

(11) Rows 95-106 refer to the rate of change of depth integrated values in the 
upper 100m of the water column, but the standard name gives no indication that 
it's depth integrated (see above) or that the region of interest is confined to 
the top 100m.  I can appreciate the quandry here that standard names shouldn't 
indicate spatial coverage, but might it be possible to argue that the top 100m 
of the water column approximates to a layer (euphotic zone?) of the ocean that 
should be treated in the same way as layers of the atmosphere?

Well that's it for now.....

Cheers, Roy.















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Subject: [CF-metadata] CMIP5 ocean biogeochemistry standard names

Dear All,

There is a need to introduce quite a number of new standard names to describe 
the output which will be produced by ocean biogeochemistry models as part of 
the CMIP5 project.  The attached spreadsheet lists the proposed name, unit and 
a brief explanation for each model output quantity. The list was coordinated by 
John Dunne and arises from lengthy discussions within the ocean biogeochemistry 
community.  Jonathan and I have both spent time looking at these names and we 
have taken care to ensure that they are as consistent as possible with existing 
names and units.  Comments on these names are now invited.

Best wishes,
Alison

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Rutherford Appleton Laboratory          Email: [email protected]
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