Dear Daniel,

Thanks for (re)proposing your names.

First a couple of general points that are relevant to many of your sea salt 
names.

In your original posting in March 
(http://mailman.cgd.ucar.edu/pipermail/cf-metadata/2017/059293.html) you 
pointed out that there are two existing names, 
mass_fraction_of_pm10_sea_salt_dry_aerosol_particles_in_air and 
mass_fraction_of_pm2p5_sea_salt_dry_aerosol_particles_in_air, which refer to 
'sea_salt' while all other salt aerosol names say 'seasalt', i.e. no 
underscore. Your suggestion was to make these two names consistent with the 
rest by changing them to also say 'seasalt'. I completely agree that the names 
should be consistent. However, I think we should change all the names to say 
'sea_salt'. This is a little more work because it requires making aliases for 
sixteen names instead of two but a quick internet search for the terms 'sea 
salt' and 'seasalt' leads me to think the first one is more widely used in a 
scientific context. IPCC reports seem to use two separate words, e.g, 
https://www.ipcc.ch/pdf/assessment.../WG1AR5_Index_FINAL.pdf and 
https://www.ipcc.ch/pdf/assessment..
 ./ipcc_wg3_ar5_annex-i.pdf. The AMS glossary http://glossary.ametsoc.org uses 
variously 'sea salt' and 'sea-salt' but not 'seasalt'. Also, in CF standard 
names we refer to 'sea_water', not 'seawater', so in terms of achieving overall 
consistency I think 'sea_salt' is the better option and I propose we 
standardize on that. Unless there are any objections to this change I will 
create the sixteen aliases at the next update of the standard name table, 
planned for 26th June. In commenting on your individual proposals I have also 
taken the liberty of changing 'seasalt' to 'sea_salt' throughout - I hope 
that's okay.

You also made the point that where we refer to aerosols of a particular size 
range, such as pm1, pm2p5 and pm10, the definitions currently describe them as 
'air pollutants' but this is not always true, particularly in the case of sea 
salt which is a naturally occurring aerosol. You suggested that we change this 
to say, for example, ' "Pm2p5 aerosol" means atmospheric particulate compounds 
with an aerodynamic diameter of less than or equal to 2.5 micrometers.' I agree 
that this is an improved definition that can be applied to existing names as 
well as your proposals - thank you. I will modify the existing definitions in 
the June update and I agree we should use this wording for your proposals.

Please see below for my comments on the individual proposals.

1. mass_concentration_of_pm10_sea_salt_dry_aerosol_particles_in_air (kg m-3)
'Mass concentration means mass per unit volume and is used in the construction 
"mass_concentration_of_X_in_Y", where X is a material constituent of Y. A 
chemical species denoted by X may be described by a single term such as 
"nitrogen" or a phrase such as "nox_expressed_as_nitrogen". "Aerosol" means the 
system of suspended liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud droplets) 
and their carrier gas, the air itself. Aerosol particles take up ambient water 
(a process known as hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative humidity and 
the composition of the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means aerosol 
particles without any water uptake. "Pm10 aerosol" is an air pollutant with an 
aerodynamic diameter of less than or equal to 10 micrometers.'

The name, units and definition all look fine. If we can agree on 'sea_salt' 
this name can be accepted for publication in the standard name table.

2. mass_concentration_of_pm2p5_sea_salt_dry_aerosol_particles_in_air (kg m-3)
'Mass concentration means mass per unit volume and is used in the construction 
"mass_concentration_of_X_in_Y", where X is a material constituent of Y. A 
chemical species denoted by X may be described by a single term such as 
"nitrogen" or a phrase such as "nox_expressed_as_nitrogen". "Aerosol" means the 
system of suspended liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud droplets) 
and their carrier gas, the air itself. Aerosol particles take up ambient water 
(a process known as hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative humidity and 
the composition of the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means aerosol 
particles without any water uptake. "Pm2p5 aerosol" means atmospheric 
particulate compounds with an aerodynamic diameter of less than or equal to 2.5 
micrometers.'

The name, units and definition all look fine. If we can agree on 'sea_salt' 
this name can be accepted for publication in the standard name table.

3. mass_concentration_of_sea_salt_cation_dry_aerosol_particles_in_air (kg m-3)
'Mass concentration means mass per unit volume and is used in the construction 
mass_concentration_of_X_in_Y, where X is a material constituent of Y. "Aerosol" 
means the system of suspended liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud 
droplets) and their carrier gas, the air itself. Aerosol particles take up 
ambient water (a process known as hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative 
humidity and the composition of the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means 
aerosol particles without any water uptake. "seasalt_cation" summarizes 
cationic sea salt componds. Depending on the model or the measurement, these 
are mainly sodium (Na+) but also potassium (K+), magnesium (Mg2+), calcium 
(Ca2+) and rarer cations. Where possible, the data variable should be 
accompanied by a complete description of the ions represented, for example, by 
using a comment attribute.'

Thank you for your detailed explanation of why it is important to have standard 
names for sea_salt_cation mass as well as simply sea_salt. In standard names we 
use the phrase 'expressed_as' when talking about the mass of a chemical 
constituent of a species, for example, 
atmosphere_mass_content_of_nox_expressed_as_nitrogen means the mass of the 
nitrogen contained in the nox. There are very many similar examples (over 100) 
currently in the standard name table. I think it would be consistent to take 
the same approach for your cation names. Your third proposal would then become:
mass_concentration_of_sea_salt_dry_aerosol_particles_expressed_as_cations_in_air
 (kg m-3)

Based on your definition and our usual wording for 'expressed_as' names, the 
definition for this name would then be:
''Mass concentration means mass per unit volume and is used in the construction 
mass_concentration_of_X_in_Y, where X is a material constituent of Y. A 
chemical species denoted by X may be described by a single term such as 
"nitrogen" or a phrase such as "nox_expressed_as_nitrogen". The phrase 
"expressed_as" is used in the construction A_expressed_as_B, where B is a 
chemical constituent of A. It means that the quantity indicated by the standard 
name is calculated solely with respect to the B contained in A, neglecting all 
other chemical constituents of A. "Aerosol" means the system of suspended 
liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud droplets) and their carrier gas, 
the air itself. Aerosol particles take up ambient water (a process known as 
hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative humidity and the composition of 
the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means aerosol particles without any 
water uptake. The phrase "sea_salt_cation" is the term used in standard names 
to descri
 be collectively the group of cationic species that occur in sea salt. The list 
of individual species that are included in a quantity having a group chemical 
standard name can vary between models. Sea salt cations are mainly sodium 
(Na+), but also include potassium (K+), magnesium (Mg2+), calcium (Ca2+) and 
rarer cations. Where possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a 
complete description of the ions represented, for example, by using a comment 
attribute.'

Okay?

We need to take the same approach with all the cation names, and indeed the 
chloride names, so if we can agree this one I think we can also go ahead and 
agree proposals 4 - 9. 

4. mass_fraction_of_pm10_sea_salt_cation_dry_aerosol_particles_in_air (1)
'Mass fraction is used in the construction "mass_fraction_of_X_in_Y", where X 
is a material constituent of Y. It means the ratio of the mass of X to the mass 
of Y (including X). Aerosol particles take up ambient water (a process known as 
hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative humidity and the composition of 
the particles. "Aerosol" means the system of suspended liquid or solid 
particles in air (except cloud droplets) and their carrier gas, the air itself. 
"Dry aerosol particles" means aerosol particles without any water uptake. "Pm10 
aerosol" is an air pollutant with an aerodynamic diameter of less than or equal 
to 10 micrometers. "seasalt_cation" summarizes cationic sea salt componds. 
Depending on the model or the measurement, these are mainly sodium (Na+) but 
also potassium (K+), magnesium (Mg2+), calcium (Ca2+) and rarer cations. Where 
possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a complete description of 
the ions represented, for example, by using a comment attribu
 te.

Following on from my comments in (3), I suggest that we write this name as 
follows:
mass_fraction_of_pm10_sea_salt_dry_aerosol_particles_expressed_as_cations_in_air
 (1)
'Mass fraction is used in the construction "mass_fraction_of_X_in_Y", where X 
is a material constituent of Y. It means the ratio of the mass of X to the mass 
of Y (including X). A chemical species denoted by X may be described by a 
single term such as "nitrogen" or a phrase such as "nox_expressed_as_nitrogen". 
The phrase "expressed_as" is used in the construction A_expressed_as_B, where B 
is a chemical constituent of A. It means that the quantity indicated by the 
standard name is calculated solely with respect to the B contained in A, 
neglecting all other chemical constituents of A. "Aerosol" means the system of 
suspended liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud droplets) and their 
carrier gas, the air itself. Aerosol particles take up ambient water (a process 
known as hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative humidity and the 
composition of the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means aerosol particles 
without any water uptake. "Pm10 aerosol" means atmospheric particulate 
 compounds with an aerodynamic diameter of less than or equal to 10 
micrometers. The phrase "sea_salt_cation" is the term used in standard names to 
describe collectively the group of cationic species that occur in sea salt. The 
list of individual species that are included in a quantity having a group 
chemical standard name can vary between models. Sea salt cations are mainly 
sodium (Na+), but also include potassium (K+), magnesium (Mg2+), calcium (Ca2+) 
and rarer cations. Where possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a 
complete description of the ions represented, for example, by using a comment 
attribute.'

Okay?

5. mass_fraction_of_pm2p5_sea_salt_cation_dry_aerosol_particles_in_air (1)
'Mass fraction is used in the construction "mass_fraction_of_X_in_Y", where X 
is a material constituent of Y. It means the ratio of the mass of X to the mass 
of Y (including X). "Aerosol" means the system of suspended liquid or solid 
particles in air (except cloud droplets) and their carrier gas, the air itself. 
Aerosol particles take up ambient water (a process known as hygroscopic growth) 
depending on the relative humidity and the composition of the particles. "Dry 
aerosol particles" means aerosol particles without any water uptake. "Pm2p5 
aerosol" is an air pollutant with an aerodynamic diameter of less than or equal 
to 2.5 micrometers. "seasalt_cation" summarizes cationic sea salt componds. 
Depending on the model or the measurement, these are mainly sodium (Na+) but 
also potassium (K+), magnesium (Mg2+), calcium (Ca2+) and rarer cations. Where 
possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a complete description of 
the ions represented, for example, by using a comment attri
 bute.'

Following on from my comments in (3), I suggest that we write this name as 
follows:
mass_fraction_of_pm2p5_sea_salt_dry_aerosol_particles_expressed_as_cations_in_air
 (1)
'Mass fraction is used in the construction "mass_fraction_of_X_in_Y", where X 
is a material constituent of Y. It means the ratio of the mass of X to the mass 
of Y (including X). A chemical species denoted by X may be described by a 
single term such as "nitrogen" or a phrase such as "nox_expressed_as_nitrogen". 
The phrase "expressed_as" is used in the construction A_expressed_as_B, where B 
is a chemical constituent of A. It means that the quantity indicated by the 
standard name is calculated solely with respect to the B contained in A, 
neglecting all other chemical constituents of A. "Aerosol" means the system of 
suspended liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud droplets) and their 
carrier gas, the air itself. Aerosol particles take up ambient water (a process 
known as hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative humidity and the 
composition of the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means aerosol particles 
without any water uptake. "Pm2p5 aerosol" means atmospheric particulate
  compounds with an aerodynamic diameter of less than or equal to 2.5 
micrometers. The phrase "sea_salt_cation" is the term used in standard names to 
describe collectively the group of cationic species that occur in sea salt. The 
list of individual species that are included in a quantity having a group 
chemical standard name can vary between models. Sea salt cations are mainly 
sodium (Na+), but also include potassium (K+), magnesium (Mg2+), calcium (Ca2+) 
and rarer cations. Where possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a 
complete description of the ions represented, for example, by using a comment 
attribute.'

Okay?

6. atmosphere_mass_content_of_sea_salt_cation_dry_aerosol_particles
'"Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "atmosphere content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the top of the 
atmosphere. For the content between specified levels in the atmosphere, 
standard names including content_of_atmosphere_layer are used. The mass is the 
total mass of the particles. "Aerosol" means the system of suspended liquid or 
solid particles in air (except cloud droplets) and their carrier gas, the air 
itself. Aerosol particles take up ambient water (a process known as hygroscopic 
growth) depending on the relative humidity and the composition of the 
particles. "Dry aerosol particle" means aerosol particles without any water 
uptake. "seasalt_cations" summarizes cationic sea salt componds. Depending on 
the model or the measurement, these are mainly sodium (Na+) but also potassium 
(K+), magnesium (Mg2+), calcium (Ca2+) and rarer cations. Where possible, the 
data variable should be accompanied by a complete description of the ions re
 presented, for example, by using a comment attribute.'

The units of the name should be kg m-2 as with all mass_content names.

Following on from my comments in (3), I suggest that we write this name as 
follows:
atmosphere_mass_content_of_sea_salt_dry_aerosol_particles_expressed_as_cations 
(kg m-2)
'"Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "atmosphere content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the top of the 
atmosphere. For the content between specified levels in the atmosphere, 
standard names including "content_of_atmosphere_layer" are used. The phrase 
"expressed_as" is used in the construction A_expressed_as_B, where B is a 
chemical constituent of A. It means that the quantity indicated by the standard 
name is calculated solely with respect to the B contained in A, neglecting all 
other chemical constituents of A. "Aerosol" means the system of suspended 
liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud droplets) and their carrier gas, 
the air itself. Aerosol particles take up ambient water (a process known as 
hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative humidity and the composition of 
the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means aerosol particles without any 
water uptake. The mass is the total mass of the particles. The phrase 
"sea_salt_c
 ation" is the term used in standard names to describe collectively the group 
of cationic species that occur in sea salt. The list of individual species that 
are included in a quantity having a group chemical standard name can vary 
between models. Sea salt cations are mainly sodium (Na+), but also include 
potassium (K+), magnesium (Mg2+), calcium (Ca2+) and rarer cations. Where 
possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a complete description of 
the ions represented, for example, by using a comment attribute.'

Okay?

7. mass_fraction_of_sea_salt_cation_dry_aerosol_particles_in_air (1)
'Mass fraction is used in the construction mass_fraction_of_X_in_Y, where X is 
a material constituent of Y. It means the ratio of the mass of X to the mass of 
Y (including X). "Aerosol" means the system of suspended liquid or solid 
particles in air (except cloud droplets) and their carrier gas, the air itself. 
Aerosol particles take up ambient water (a process known as hygroscopic growth) 
depending on the relative humidity and the composition of the particles. "Dry 
aerosol particles" means aerosol particles without any water uptake. 
"seasalt_cation" summarizes cationic sea salt componds. Depending on the model 
or the measurement, these are mainly sodium (Na+) but also potassium (K+), 
magnesium (Mg2+), calcium (Ca2+) and rarer cations. Where possible, the data 
variable should be accompanied by a complete description of the ions 
represented, for example, by using a comment attribute.'

Following on from my comments in (3), I suggest that we write this name as 
follows:
mass_fraction_of_sea_salt_dry_aerosol_particles_expressed_as_cations_in_air (1)
'Mass fraction is used in the construction "mass_fraction_of_X_in_Y", where X 
is a material constituent of Y. It means the ratio of the mass of X to the mass 
of Y (including X). A chemical species denoted by X may be described by a 
single term such as "nitrogen" or a phrase such as "nox_expressed_as_nitrogen". 
The phrase "expressed_as" is used in the construction A_expressed_as_B, where B 
is a chemical constituent of A. It means that the quantity indicated by the 
standard name is calculated solely with respect to the B contained in A, 
neglecting all other chemical constituents of A. "Aerosol" means the system of 
suspended liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud droplets) and their 
carrier gas, the air itself. Aerosol particles take up ambient water (a process 
known as hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative humidity and the 
composition of the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means aerosol particles 
without any water uptake. The phrase "sea_salt_cation" is the term used
  in standard names to describe collectively the group of cationic species that 
occur in sea salt. The list of individual species that are included in a 
quantity having a group chemical standard name can vary between models. Sea 
salt cations are mainly sodium (Na+), but also include potassium (K+), 
magnesium (Mg2+), calcium (Ca2+) and rarer cations. Where possible, the data 
variable should be accompanied by a complete description of the ions 
represented, for example, by using a comment attribute.'

Okay?

8. mass_concentration_of_pm10_sea_salt_cation_dry_aerosol_particles_in_air (kg 
m-3)
'Mass concentration means mass per unit volume and is used in the construction 
mass_concentration_of_X_in_Y, where X is a material constituent of Y. "Aerosol" 
means the system of suspended liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud 
droplets) and their carrier gas, the air itself. Aerosol particles take up 
ambient water (a process known as hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative 
humidity and the composition of the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means 
aerosol particles without any water uptake. "Pm10 aerosol" denotes atmospheric 
particulate compounds with an aerodynamic diameter of less than or equal to 10 
micrometers. "seasalt_cation" summarizes cationic sea salt componds. Depending 
on the model or the measurement, these are mainly sodium (Na+) but also 
potassium (K+), magnesium (Mg2+), calcium (Ca2+) and rarer cations. Where 
possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a complete description of 
the ions represented, for example, by using a comment attribute.'

Following on from my comments in (3), I suggest that we write this name as 
follows:
mass_concentration_of_pm10_sea_salt_dry_aerosol_particles_expressed_as_cations_in_air
 (kg m-3)
' Mass concentration means mass per unit volume and is used in the construction 
"mass_concentration_of_X_in_Y", where X is a material constituent of Y. A 
chemical species denoted by X may be described by a single term such as 
"nitrogen" or a phrase such as "nox_expressed_as_nitrogen". The phrase 
"expressed_as" is used in the construction A_expressed_as_B, where B is a 
chemical constituent of A. It means that the quantity indicated by the standard 
name is calculated solely with respect to the B contained in A, neglecting all 
other chemical constituents of A. "Aerosol" means the system of suspended 
liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud droplets) and their carrier gas, 
the air itself. Aerosol particles take up ambient water (a process known as 
hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative humidity and the composition of 
the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means aerosol particles without any 
water uptake. "Pm10 aerosol" means atmospheric particulate compounds with an 
aerodyna
 mic diameter of less than or equal to 10 micrometers. The phrase 
"sea_salt_cation" is the term used in standard names to describe collectively 
the group of cationic species that occur in sea salt. The list of individual 
species that are included in a quantity having a group chemical standard name 
can vary between models. Sea salt cations are mainly sodium (Na+), but also 
include potassium (K+), magnesium (Mg2+), calcium (Ca2+) and rarer cations. 
Where possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a complete 
description of the ions represented, for example, by using a comment attribute.'

Okay?

9. mass_concentration_of_pm2p5_sea_salt_cation_dry_aerosol_particles_in_air (kg 
m-3)
'Mass concentration means mass per unit volume and is used in the construction 
mass_concentration_of_X_in_Y, where X is a material constituent of Y. "Aerosol" 
means the system of suspended liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud 
droplets) and their carrier gas, the air itself. Aerosol particles take up 
ambient water (a process known as hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative 
humidity and the composition of the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means 
aerosol particles without any water uptake. "Pm2p5 aerosol" denotes atmospheric 
particulate compounds with an aerodynamic diameter of less than or equal to 2.5 
micrometers. "seasalt_cation" summarizes cationic sea salt componds. Depending 
on the model or the measurement, these are mainly sodium (Na+) but also 
potassium (K+), magnesium (Mg2+), calcium (Ca2+) and rarer cations. Where 
possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a complete description of 
the ions represented, for example, by using a comment attribute.'

Following on from my comments in (3), I suggest that we write this name as 
follows:
mass_concentration_of_pm2p5_sea_salt_dry_aerosol_particles_expressed_as_cations_in_air
 (kg m-3)
'Mass concentration means mass per unit volume and is used in the construction 
"mass_concentration_of_X_in_Y", where X is a material constituent of Y. A 
chemical species denoted by X may be described by a single term such as 
"nitrogen" or a phrase such as "nox_expressed_as_nitrogen". The phrase 
"expressed_as" is used in the construction A_expressed_as_B, where B is a 
chemical constituent of A. It means that the quantity indicated by the standard 
name is calculated solely with respect to the B contained in A, neglecting all 
other chemical constituents of A. "Aerosol" means the system of suspended 
liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud droplets) and their carrier gas, 
the air itself. Aerosol particles take up ambient water (a process known as 
hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative humidity and the composition of 
the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means aerosol particles without any 
water uptake. "Pm2p5 aerosol" means atmospheric particulate compounds with an 
aerodyna
 mic diameter of less than or equal to 2.5 micrometers. The phrase 
"sea_salt_cation" is the term used in standard names to describe collectively 
the group of cationic species that occur in sea salt. The list of individual 
species that are included in a quantity having a group chemical standard name 
can vary between models. Sea salt cations are mainly sodium (Na+), but also 
include potassium (K+), magnesium (Mg2+), calcium (Ca2+) and rarer cations. 
Where possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a complete 
description of the ions represented, for example, by using a comment attribute.'

Okay?

10. mass_concentration_of_chloride_dry_aerosol_particles_in_air (kg m-3)
Mass concentration means mass per unit volume and is used in the construction 
mass_concentration_of_X_in_Y, where X is a material  constituent of Y. A 
chemical species denoted by X may be described by a single term such as 
'nitrogen' or a phrase such as 'nox_expressed_as_nitrogen'. The chemical 
formula for chloride is Cl-.'

Following on from my comments in (3), I think we should use the 'expressed_as' 
syntax to indicate that the name refers to the mass of the chloride in the 
aerosol in the same way as I have suggested for the cation names.

You say:
> Reasons for (10) to (12): Currently, standard names only exist for some
> [cation]-chloride ion-compounds but not for chloride individually. When
> considering aged sea salt it might be interesting to have the chloride
> concentrations available.
The names you are suggesting seem to refer to all chloride aerosol in air, 
regardless of whether it originated as sea salt. Is that the correct 
interpretation? If, on the other hand, you are specifically interested in 
chloride aerosol that originated as sea salt we would need to somehow include 
that in the names.

For the name as proposed, I suggest rewriting it as:
mass_concentration_of_dry_aerosol_particles_expressed_as_chloride_in_air (kg 
m-3)
'Mass concentration means mass per unit volume and is used in the construction 
"mass_concentration_of_X_in_Y", where X is a material constituent of Y. A 
chemical species denoted by X may be described by a single term such as 
"nitrogen" or a phrase such as "nox_expressed_as_nitrogen". The phrase 
"expressed_as" is used in the construction A_expressed_as_B, where B is a 
chemical constituent of A. It means that the quantity indicated by the standard 
name is calculated solely with respect to the B contained in A, neglecting all 
other chemical constituents of A. "Aerosol" means the system of suspended 
liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud droplets) and their carrier gas, 
the air itself. Aerosol particles take up ambient water (a process known as 
hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative humidity and the composition of 
the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means aerosol particles without any 
water uptake. The chemical formula for chloride is Cl-.'

Okay?

11. mass_fraction_of_chloride_dry_aerosol_particles_in_air (1)
'Mass fraction is used in the construction mass_fraction_of_X_in_Y, whereX is a 
material constituent of Y. It means the ratio of the mass of X to the mass of Y 
(including X). A chemical species denoted by X may be described by a single 
term such as 'nitrogen' or a phrase such as 'nox_expressed_as_nitrogen'. The 
chemical formula for chloride is Cl-.'

Following on from my comments in (10), I suggest that we write this name as 
follows:
mass_fraction_of_dry_aerosol_particles_expressed_as_chloride_in_air (1)
'Mass fraction is used in the construction "mass_fraction_of_X_in_Y", where X 
is a material constituent of Y. It means the ratio of the mass of X to the mass 
of Y (including X). A chemical species denoted by X may be described by a 
single term such as "nitrogen" or a phrase such as "nox_expressed_as_nitrogen". 
The phrase "expressed_as" is used in the construction A_expressed_as_B, where B 
is a chemical constituent of A. It means that the quantity indicated by the 
standard name is calculated solely with respect to the B contained in A, 
neglecting all other chemical constituents of A. "Aerosol" means the system of 
suspended liquid or solid particles in air (except cloud droplets) and their 
carrier gas, the air itself. Aerosol particles take up ambient water (a process 
known as hygroscopic growth) depending on the relative humidity and the 
composition of the particles. "Dry aerosol particles" means aerosol particles 
without any water uptake. The chemical formula for chloride is Cl-.'

12. mole_concentration_of_chloride_in_air (mol m-3)
'Mole concentration means number of moles per unit volume, also called 
"molarity", and is used in the construction mole_concentration_of_X_in_Y, where 
X is a material constituent of Y. A chemical species denoted by X may be 
described by a single term such as 'nitrogen' or a phrase such as 
'nox_expressed_as_nitrogen'. The chemical formula for chloride is Cl-.'

I assume the intention of this name is to refer to all chloride compounds in 
air, whether aerosol or gaseous. Is that correct? Does chloride occur on its 
own as a radical or ion in the atmosphere? If so, is it also included in this 
quantity?

13. tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_due_to_deposition 
(kg m-2 s-1)
' "Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "atmosphere content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the top of the 
atmosphere. For the content between specified levels in the atmosphere, 
standard names including "content_of_atmosphere_layer" are used. 
"tendency_of_X" means derivative of X with respect to time. The specification 
of a physical process by the phrase "due_to_" process means that the quantity 
named is a single term in a sum of terms which together compose the general 
quantity named by omitting the phrase. "Deposition" is the sum of wet and dry 
deposition. Usually, particle bound and gaseous nitrogen compounds, such as 
nitrogen monoxide (NO), nitrogen dioxide (NO2), dinitrogen pentoxide (N2O5), 
nitric acid (HNO3), nitrate (NO3-), peroxynitric acid (HNO4), bromine nitrate 
(BrONO2), chlorine nitrate (ClONO2) and organic nitrates (most notably 
peroxyacetyl nitrate, sometimes referred to as PAN, (CH3COO2NO2)), are 
included. The list of in
 dividual species that are included in this quantity can vary between models. 
Where possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a complete 
description of the species represented, for example, by using a comment 
attribute.'

Just to clarify - is this the mass of only the nitrogen contained in the 
various species, or is it the total mass of the species containing the 
nitrogen? The name and definition as they stand are ambiguous because they 
could mean either.

If it is only the mass of the nitrogen I would once again suggest using 
'expressed_as' syntax to make this really clear, so I'd write the name as 
something like:
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_compounds_expressed_as_nitrogen_due_to_deposition

On the other hand, if it is the total mass of the species I would say:
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_compounds_due_to_deposition

Obviously the precise wording of the definition would depend on which syntax we 
choose, but in either case I would include the following sentence : ' "Oxidized 
nitrogen compounds" means all chemical species containing nitrogen atoms with 
an oxidation state greater than zero' before listing the most common species.

We recently added three nitrogen_deposition names that you proposed:
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_nitrogen_due_to_deposition
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_nitrogen_due_to_dry_deposition
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_nitrogen_due_to_wet_deposition
in which the definitions say ' "Nitrogen" summarizes all chemical species 
containing nitrogen atoms. Usually, particle bound and gaseous nitrogen 
compounds, such as atomic nitrogen (N), nitrogen monoxide (NO), nitrogen 
dioxide (NO2), dinitrogen pentoxide (N2O5), nitric acid (HNO3), nitrage (NO3-), 
peroxynitric acid (HNO4), ammoina (NH3), ammonium (NH4+), bromine nitrate 
(BrONO2), chlorine nitrate (ClONO2) and organic nitrates (most notably 
peroxyacetyl nitrate, sometimes referred to as PAN, (CH3COO2NO2)) are included. 
The list of individual species that are included in this quantity can vary 
between models. Where possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a 
complete description of the species represented, for example, by using a 
comment attribute.' I realise now that these names (and definitions) suffer 
from the same ambiguity as the current proposal. Neither the names nor the 
definitions really make clear whether we are talking about the mass of the 
nitrogen in the compoun
 ds or the total mass of the compounds. Whatever the outcome of the current 
discussion, we should update the three existing names to be consistent.

14. tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_due_to_deposition 
(kg m-2 s-1)
' "Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "atmosphere content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the top of the 
atmosphere. For the content between specified levels in the atmosphere, 
standard names including "content_of_atmosphere_layer" are used. 
"tendency_of_X" means derivative of X with respect to time. The specification 
of a physical process by the phrase "due_to_" process means that the quantity 
named is a single term in a sum of terms which together compose the general 
quantity named by omitting the phrase. "Deposition" is the sum of wet and dry 
deposition. "reduced_nitrogen" summarizes all chemical species containing 
reduced nitrogen atoms. Usually, particle bound and gaseous nitrogen compounds, 
primarily ammonium (NH4+) and ammoina (NH3), are included. The list of 
individual species that are included in this quantity can vary between models. 
Where possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a complete 
description of the spec
 ies represented, for example, by using a comment attribute.'

My comments about this name are very similar to proposal (13). Again, we could 
write this name as:
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_compounds_expressed_as_nitrogen_due_to_deposition
or
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_compounds_due_to_deposition
depending on which mass is intended.

In either case I would include the following sentence in the definition: ' 
"Reduced nitrogen compounds" means all chemical species containing nitrogen 
atoms with an oxidation state less than zero.'

15. 
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_due_to_dry_deposition 
(kg m-2 s-1)
' "Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "atmosphere content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the top of the 
atmosphere. For the content between specified levels in the atmosphere, 
standard names including "content_of_atmosphere_layer" are used. 
"tendency_of_X" means derivative of X with respect to time. The specification 
of a physical process by the phrase "due_to_" process means that the quantity 
named is a single term in a sum of terms which together compose the general 
quantity named by omitting the phrase. "dry_deposition" is the sum of turbulent 
deposition and gravitational settling. "oxidized_nitrogen" summarizes all 
chemical species containing oxidized nitrogen atoms. Usually, particle bound 
and gaseous nitrogen compounds, such as nitrogen monoxide (NO), nitrogen 
dioxide (NO2), dinitrogen pentoxide (N2O5), nitric acid (HNO3), nitrate (NO3-), 
peroxynitric acid (HNO4), bromine nitrate (BrONO2), chlorine nitrate (ClONO2) 
and organic n
 itrates (most notably peroxyacetyl nitrate, sometimes referred to as PAN, 
(CH3COO2NO2)), are included. The list of individual species that are included 
in this quantity can vary between models. Where possible, the data variable 
should be accompanied by a complete description of the species represented, for 
example, by using a comment attribute.'

My comments about this name are very similar to proposal (13). Again, we could 
write this name as:
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_compounds_expressed_as_nitrogen_due_to_dry_deposition
or
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_compounds_due_to_dry_deposition
depending on which mass is intended.

16. 
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_due_to_dry_deposition 
(kg m-2 s-1)
' "Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "atmosphere content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the top of the 
atmosphere. For the content between specified levels in the atmosphere, 
standard names including "content_of_atmosphere_layer" are used. 
"tendency_of_X" means derivative of X with respect to time. The specification 
of a physical process by the phrase "due_to_" process means that the quantity 
named is a single term in a sum of terms which together compose the general 
quantity named by omitting the phrase. "dry_deposition" is the sum of turbulent 
deposition and gravitational settling. "reduced_nitrogen" summarizes all 
chemical species containing reduced nitrogen atoms. Usually, particle bound and 
gaseous nitrogen compounds, primarily ammonium (NH4+) and ammoina (NH3), are 
included. The list of individual species that are included in this quantity can 
vary between models. Where possible, the data variable should be accompanied by 
a com
 plete description of the species represented, for example, by using a comment 
attribute.'

My comments about this name are very similar to proposal (13). Again, we could 
write this name as:
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_compounds_expressed_as_nitrogen_due_to_dry_deposition
or
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_compounds_due_to_dry_deposition
depending on which mass is intended.

17. 
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_due_to_wet_deposition 
(kg m-2 s-1)
' "Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "atmosphere content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the top of the 
atmosphere. For the content between specified levels in the atmosphere, 
standard names including "content_of_atmosphere_layer" are used. 
"tendency_of_X" means derivative of X with respect to time. The specification 
of a physical process by the phrase "due_to_" process means that the quantity 
named is a single term in a sum of terms which together compose the general 
quantity named by omitting the phrase. "wet deposition" means deposition by 
precipitation. "oxidized_nitrogen" summarizes all chemical species containing 
oxidized nitrogen atoms. Usually, particle bound and gaseous nitrogen 
compounds, such as nitrogen monoxide (NO), nitrogen dioxide (NO2), dinitrogen 
pentoxide (N2O5), nitric acid (HNO3), nitrate (NO3-), peroxynitric acid (HNO4), 
bromine nitrate (BrONO2), chlorine nitrate (ClONO2) and organic nitrates (most 
notably peroxy
 acetyl nitrate, sometimes referred to as PAN, (CH3COO2NO2)), are included. The 
list of individual species that are included in this quantity can vary between 
models. Where possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a complete 
description of the species represented, for example, by using a comment 
attribute.'

My comments about this name are very similar to proposal (13). Again, we could 
write this name as:
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_compounds_expressed_as_nitrogen_due_to_wet_deposition
or
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_compounds_due_to_wet_deposition
depending on which mass is intended.

18. 
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_due_to_wet_deposition 
(kg m-2 s-1)
' "Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "ocean content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the bottom of the 
ocean. "tendency_of_X" means derivative of X with respect to time. The 
specification of a physical process by the phrase due_to_process means that the 
quantity named is asingle term in a sum of terms which together compose the 
general quantity named by omitting the phrase. "wet_deposition" means 
deposition by precipitation. "oxidized_nitrogen" summarizes all chemical 
species containing oxidized nitrogen atoms. Usually, particle bound and gaseous 
nitrogen compounds, such as nitrogen monoxide (NO), nitrogen dioxide (NO2), 
dinitrogen pentoxide (N2O5), nitric acid (HNO3), nitrate (NO3-), peroxynitric 
acid (HNO4), bromine nitrate (BrONO2), chlorine nitrate (ClONO2) and organic 
nitrates (most notably peroxyacetyl nitrate, sometimes referred to as PAN, 
(CH3COO2NO2)), are included. The list of individual species that are included 
in this quan
 tity can vary between models. Where possible, the data variable should be 
accompanied by a complete description of the species represented, for example, 
by using a comment attribute.'

My comments about this name are very similar to proposal (13). Again, we could 
write this name as:
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_compounds_expressed_as_nitrogen_due_to_wet_deposition
or
tendency_of_atmosphere_mass_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_compounds_due_to_wet_deposition
depending on which mass is intended.

19. tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_due_to_deposition (mol 
m-2 s-1)
' "Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "ocean content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the bottom of the 
ocean. "tendency_of_X" means derivative of X with respect to time. The 
specification of a physical process by the phrase due_to_process means that the 
quantity named is a single term in a sum of terms which together compose the 
general quantity named by omitting the phrase. Deposition of nitrogen into the 
ocean is the sum of dry and wet deposition of the considered species onto the 
ocean surface from the atmosphere. "reduced_nitrogen" summarizes all chemical 
species containing reduced nitrogen atoms. Usually, particle bound and gaseous 
nitrogen compounds, primarily ammonium (NH4+) and ammoina (NH3), are included. 
The list of individual species that are included in this quantity can vary 
between models. Where possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a 
complete description of the species represented, for example, by using a 
 comment attribute.'

As with the atmosphere mass content names, my question is: does the name mean 
moles of nitrogen contained in the compounds, or moles of the compounds? (I 
appreciate that they might be the same number if each molecule of the compound 
contains one nitrogen atom, but that won't necessarily always be the case. For 
example, some of the oxidised nitrogen species contain more than one atom of N).

We  have many existing names that use 'expressed_as' with mole_fraction and 
mole_concentration names, so I think it can perfectly well be extended for use 
with mole_content names. Similar to the atmosphere names I would suggest either:
tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_compounds_expressed_as_nitrogen_due_to_deposition
or
tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_compounds_due_to_deposition
depending on which species we are counting.

20. tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_due_to_deposition (mol 
m-2 s-1)
' "Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "ocean content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the bottom of the 
ocean. "tendency_of_X" means derivative of X with respect to time. The 
specification of a physical process by the phrase due_to_process means that the 
quantity named is a single term in a sum of terms which together compose the 
general quantity named by omitting the phrase. Deposition of nitrogen into the 
ocean is the sum of dry and wet deposition of the considered species onto the 
ocean surface from the atmosphere. "oxidized_nitrogen" summarizes all chemical 
species containing oxidized nitrogen atoms. Usually, particle bound and gaseous 
nitrogen compounds, such as nitrogen monoxide (NO), nitrogen dioxide (NO2), 
dinitrogen pentoxide (N2O5), nitric acid (HNO3), nitrate (NO3-), peroxynitric 
acid (HNO4), bromine nitrate (BrONO2), chlorine nitrate (ClONO2) and organic 
nitrates (most notably peroxyacetyl nitrate, sometimes referred to as P
 AN, (CH3COO2NO2)), are included. The list of individual species that are 
included in this quantity can vary between models. Where possible, the data 
variable should be accompanied by a complete description of the species 
represented, for example, by using a comment attribute.'

My comments about this name are very similar to proposal (19). Again, we could 
write this name as:
tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_compounds_expressed_as_nitrogen_due_to_deposition
or
tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_compounds_due_to_deposition
depending on which species we are counting.

21. tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_due_to_dry_deposition 
(mol m-2 s-1)
' "Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "ocean content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the bottom of the 
ocean. "tendency_of_X" means derivative of X with respect to time. The 
specification of a physical process by the phrase due_to_process means that the 
quantity named is asingle term in a sum of terms which together compose the 
general quantity named by omitting the phrase. "dry_deposition" is the sum of 
turbulent deposition and gravitational settling of the considered species onto 
the ocean surface from the atmosphere. "reduced_nitrogen" summarizes all 
chemical species containing reduced nitrogen atoms. Usually, particle bound and 
gaseous nitrogen compounds, primarily ammonium (NH4+) and ammoina (NH3), are 
included. The list of individual species that are included in this quantity can 
vary between models. Where possible, the data variable should be accompanied by 
a complete description of the species represented, for example, by using
  a comment attribute.'

My comments about this name are very similar to proposal (19). Again, we could 
write this name as:
tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_compounds_expressed_as_nitrogen_due_to_dry_deposition
or
tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_compounds_due_to_dry_deposition
depending on which species we are counting.

22. tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_due_to_dry_deposition 
(mol m-2 s-1)
' "Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "ocean content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the bottom of the 
ocean. "tendency_of_X" means derivative of X with respect to time. The 
specification of a physical process by the phrase due_to_process means that the 
quantity named is asingle term in a sum of terms which together compose the 
general quantity named by omitting the phrase. "dry_deposition" is the sum of 
turbulent deposition and gravitational settling of the considered species onto 
the ocean surface from the atmosphere. "oxidized_nitrogen" summarizes all 
chemical species containing oxidized nitrogen atoms. Usually, particle bound 
and gaseous nitrogen compounds, such as nitrogen monoxide (NO), nitrogen 
dioxide (NO2), dinitrogen pentoxide (N2O5), nitric acid (HNO3), nitrate (NO3-), 
peroxynitric acid (HNO4), bromine nitrate (BrONO2), chlorine nitrate (ClONO2) 
and organic nitrates (most notably peroxyacetyl nitrate, sometimes referred to a
 s PAN, (CH3COO2NO2)), are included. The list of individual species that are 
included in this quantity can vary between models. Where possible, the data 
variable should be accompanied by a complete description of the species 
represented, for example, by using a comment attribute.'

My comments about this name are very similar to proposal (19). Again, we could 
write this name as:
tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_compounds_expressed_as_nitrogen_due_to_dry_deposition
or
tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_compounds_due_to_dry_deposition
depending on which species we are counting.

23. tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_due_to_wet_deposition 
(mol m-2 s-1)
' "Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "ocean content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the bottom of the 
ocean. "tendency_of_X" means derivative of X with respect to time. The 
specification of a physical process by the phrase due_to_process means that the 
quantity named is asingle term in a sum of terms which together compose the 
general quantity named by omitting the phrase. "wet_deposition" means 
deposition by precipitation. "reduced_nitrogen" summarizes all chemical species 
containing reduced nitrogen atoms. Usually, particle bound and gaseous nitrogen 
compounds, primarily ammonium (NH4+) and ammoina (NH3), are included. The list 
of individual species that are included in this quantity can vary between 
models. Where possible, the data variable should be accompanied by a complete 
description of the species represented, for example, by using a comment 
attribute.'

My comments about this name are very similar to proposal (19). Again, we could 
write this name as:
tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_compounds_expressed_as_nitrogen_due_to_wet_deposition
or
tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_reduced_nitrogen_compounds_due_to_wet_deposition
depending on which species we are counting.

24. tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_due_to_wet_deposition 
(mol m-2 s-1)
' "Content" indicates a quantity per unit area. The "ocean content" of a 
quantity refers to the vertical integral from the surface to the bottom of the 
ocean. "tendency_of_X" means derivative of X with respect to time. The 
specification of a physical process by the phrase due_to_process means that the 
quantity named is asingle term in a sum of terms which together compose the 
general quantity named by omitting the phrase. "wet_deposition" means 
deposition by precipitation. "oxidized_nitrogen" summarizes all chemical 
species containing oxidized nitrogen atoms. Usually, particle bound and gaseous 
nitrogen compounds, such as nitrogen monoxide (NO), nitrogen dioxide (NO2), 
dinitrogen pentoxide (N2O5), nitric acid (HNO3), nitrate (NO3-), peroxynitric 
acid (HNO4), bromine nitrate (BrONO2), chlorine nitrate (ClONO2) and organic 
nitrates (most notably peroxyacetyl nitrate, sometimes referred to as PAN, 
(CH3COO2NO2)), are included. The list of individual species that are included 
in this quan
 tity can vary between models. Where possible, the data variable should be 
accompanied by a complete description of the species represented, for example, 
by using a comment attribute.'

My comments about this name are very similar to proposal (19). Again, we could 
write this name as:
tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_compounds_expressed_as_nitrogen_due_to_wet_deposition
or
tendency_of_ocean_mole_content_of_oxidized_nitrogen_compounds_due_to_wet_deposition
depending on which species we are counting.

Best wishes,
Alison

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Alison Pamment                                                       Tel: +44 
1235 778065
Centre for Environmental Data Analysis         Email: [email protected]
STFC Rutherford Appleton Laboratory     
R25, 2.22
Harwell Campus, Didcot, OX11 0QX, U.K.

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