amichair commented on code in PR #5:
URL: https://github.com/apache/aries-antora-site/pull/5#discussion_r3331806254


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modules/ROOT/pages/modules/rsa.adoc:
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@@ -1,76 +1,104 @@
 = RSA (Remote Service Admin)
 
-The Aries Remote Service Admin (RSA) project allows to transparently use OSGi 
services for remote communication.
-OSGi services can be marked for export by adding a service property 
`service.exported.interfaces=*`.
-Various other properties  can be used to customize how the service is to be 
exposed.
+The Aries Remote Service Admin (RSA) project allows regular OSGi services to 
be transparently accessed remotely.
+OSGi services can be marked for export by adding the service property 
`service.exported.interfaces=*`.
+Various other properties can be used to customize how the service is to be 
exposed.
 
-For more information, check out section "122 JPA Service Specification Version 
1.0" in the "OSGi Service Platform Enterprise Specification, Release 4, Version 
4.2" available for public download from the 
http://www.osgi.org/Download/Release4V43[OSGi Alliance].
+For more information, see section 122 "Remote Service Admin Service 
Specification"
+in the "OSGi Compendium Release 8" specification, available from the 
https://docs.osgi.org/specification/osgi.cmpn/8.0.0/[OSGi Working Group].

Review Comment:
   updated



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