CLOUDSTACK-809 minor changes to the UI strings

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Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/commit/4ac6ebb2
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Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/diff/4ac6ebb2

Branch: refs/heads/ldapplugin
Commit: 4ac6ebb2dbf7218af4d0bfcdc5a05b953e4d02ed
Parents: 51b7f5d
Author: radhikap <[email protected]>
Authored: Wed Jul 17 12:21:47 2013 +0530
Committer: radhikap <[email protected]>
Committed: Wed Jul 17 12:22:11 2013 +0530

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 docs/en-US/multiple-ip-nic.xml | 73 ++++++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 39 insertions(+), 34 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/4ac6ebb2/docs/en-US/multiple-ip-nic.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/multiple-ip-nic.xml b/docs/en-US/multiple-ip-nic.xml
index 926235c..790befc 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/multiple-ip-nic.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/multiple-ip-nic.xml
@@ -21,37 +21,40 @@
 -->
 <section id="multiple-ip-nic">
   <title>Configuring Multiple IP Addresses on a Single NIC</title>
-  <para>&PRODUCT; now provides you the ability to associate multiple private 
IP addresses per guest
-    VM NIC. This feature is supported on all the network 
configurations&mdash;Basic, Advanced, and
-    VPC. Security Groups, Static NAT and Port forwarding services are 
supported on these additional
-    IPs. In addition to the primary IP, you can assign additional IPs to the 
guest VM NIC.</para>
+  <para>&PRODUCT; provides you the ability to associate multiple private IP 
addresses per guest VM
+    NIC. In addition to the primary IP, you can assign additional IPs to the 
guest VM NIC. This
+    feature is supported on all the network configurations&mdash;Basic, 
Advanced, and VPC. Security
+    Groups, Static NAT and Port forwarding services are supported on these 
additional IPs. </para>
   <para>As always, you can specify an IP from the guest subnet; if not 
specified, an IP is
     automatically picked up from the guest VM subnet. You can view the IPs 
associated with for each
-    guest VM NICs on the UI. You can apply NAT on these additional guest IPs 
by using firewall
-    configuration in the &PRODUCT; UI. You must specify the NIC to which the 
IP should be
+    guest VM NICs on the UI. You can apply NAT on these additional guest IPs 
by using network
+    configuration option in the &PRODUCT; UI. You must specify the NIC to 
which the IP should be
     associated.</para>
-  <para>This feature is supported on XenServer, KVM, and VMware 
hypervisors.</para>
-  <note>
-    <para>You need to configure the secondary IP address on the guest VM. 
&PRODUCT; will
-      not configure the acquired IP address on the VM. Ensure that you assign 
IPs to NIC each
-      time the VM reboots.</para>
-  </note>
-  <para>Some of the use cases are described below:</para>
-  <itemizedlist>
-    <listitem>
-      <para>Building network appliances: Network appliances, such as firewalls 
and load balancers,
-        generally work best when they have access to multiple IP addresses on 
the network
-        interface.</para>
-    </listitem>
-    <listitem>
-      <para>Moving private IP addresses between interfaces or instances. 
Applications that are bound
-        to specific IP addresses can be moved between instances. </para>
-    </listitem>
-    <listitem>
-      <para>Hosting multiple SSL Websites on a single instance. You can 
install multiple SSL
-        certificates on a single instance, each associated with a distinct IP 
address.</para>
-    </listitem>
-  </itemizedlist>
+  <para>This feature is supported on XenServer, KVM, and VMware hypervisors. 
Note that Basic zone
+    security groups are not supported on VMware.</para>
+  <section id="usecases-mip">
+    <title>Use Cases</title>
+    <para>Some of the use cases are described below:</para>
+    <itemizedlist>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>Network devices, such as firewalls and load balancers, generally 
work best when they
+          have access to multiple IP addresses on the network interface.</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>Moving private IP addresses between interfaces or instances. 
Applications that are
+          bound to specific IP addresses can be moved between instances. 
</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>Hosting multiple SSL Websites on a single instance. You can 
install multiple SSL
+          certificates on a single instance, each associated with a distinct 
IP address.</para>
+      </listitem>
+    </itemizedlist>
+  </section>
+  <section id="guideline-nic">
+    <title>Guidelines</title>
+    <para>To prevent IP conflict, configure different subnets when multiple 
networks are connected
+      to the same VM.</para>
+  </section>
   <section id="workflow-rn">
     <title>Assigning Additional IPs to a VM</title>
     <orderedlist>
@@ -68,17 +71,19 @@
         <para>In the Details tab, click NICs.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Click View All.</para>
+        <para>Click View Secondary IPs.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Click Acquire New IP, and click Yes in the confirmation 
dialog.</para>
-        <para>You are prompted for confirmation because, typically, IP 
addresses are a limited
-          resource. Within a few moments, the new IP address should appear 
with the state Allocated.
-          You can now use the IP address in Port Forwarding or StaticNAT 
rules.</para>
+        <para>Click Acquire New Secondary IP, and click Yes in the 
confirmation dialog.</para>
+        <para>You need to specify the secondary IP address on the guest VM. 
&PRODUCT; will not
+          automatically configure the acquired IP address on the VM. Ensure 
that you assign IPs to
+          NIC each time the VM reboots.</para>
+        <para>Within a few moments, the new IP address should appear with the 
state Allocated. You
+          can now use the IP address in Port Forwarding or StaticNAT 
rules.</para>
       </listitem>
     </orderedlist>
   </section>
-   <section id="caveats">
+  <section id="caveats">
     <title>Port Forwarding and StaticNAT Services Changes</title>
     <para>Because multiple IPs can be associated per NIC, you are allowed to 
select a desired IP for
       the Port Forwarding and StaticNAT services. The default is the primary 
IP. To enable this

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