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  refs/heads/master f37417e36 -> d197687a6

CLOUDSTACK-850 fixed review comments from sheng/community


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Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: d197687a64522473a5ad5e7a9ad3a454a77a7e11
Parents: f37417e
Author: Radhika PC <[email protected]>
Authored: Mon Aug 5 14:17:21 2013 +0530
Committer: Radhika PC <[email protected]>
Committed: Mon Aug 5 14:17:42 2013 +0530

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 docs/en-US/pvlan.xml | 18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/d197687a/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml b/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml
index d569507..f647d93 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml
@@ -113,19 +113,19 @@
           ports. Configure the switch port connected to the router in PVLAN 
promiscuous trunk mode,
           which would translate an isolated VLAN to primary VLAN for the 
PVLAN-unaware router. </para>
         <para>Note that only Cisco Catalyst 4500 has the PVLAN promiscuous 
trunk mode to connect
-          both normal VLAN and PVLAN to a PVLAN-unaware switch. For other 
Catalyst PVLAN support
-          switch, connect the switch to upper switch by using cables. The 
number of cables should be
-          greater than the number of PVLANs used.</para>
+          both normal VLAN and PVLAN to a PVLAN-unaware switch. For the other 
Catalyst PVLAN support
+          switch, connect the switch to upper switch by using cables, one each 
for a PVLAN
+          pair.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>Configure private VLAN on your physical switches 
out-of-band.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Before you use PVLAN on XenServer and KVM, enable Open vSwitch 
(OVS) .</para>
+        <para>Before you use PVLAN on XenServer and KVM, enable Open vSwitch 
(OVS).</para>
         <note>
-          <para>OVS on XenServer and KVM does not support PVLAN. Therefore, 
simulate PVLAN on OVS
-            for XenServer and KVM by modifying the flow table and tagging 
every traffic leaving
-            guest VMs with the secondary VLAN ID.</para>
+          <para>OVS on XenServer and KVM does not support PVLAN natively. 
Therefore, &PRODUCT;
+            managed to simulate PVLAN on OVS for XenServer and KVM by 
modifying the flow
+            table.</para>
         </note>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -176,8 +176,8 @@
             <para><emphasis role="bold">VLAN ID</emphasis>: The unique ID of 
the VLAN.</para>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
-            <para><emphasis role="bold">Isolated VLAN ID</emphasis>: The 
unique ID of the Secondary
-              Isolated VLAN. </para>
+            <para><emphasis role="bold">Secondary Isolated VLAN ID</emphasis>: 
The unique ID of the
+              Secondary Isolated VLAN. </para>
             <para>For the description on Secondary Isolated VLAN, see <xref 
linkend="about-pvlan"
               />.</para>
           </listitem>

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