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CLOUDSTACK-1316 some minor edits


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Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: a2e615c44174282b633133e240c7fbb4f4493691
Parents: 41f2c75
Author: radhikap <[email protected]>
Authored: Mon Aug 19 13:02:07 2013 +0530
Committer: radhikap <[email protected]>
Committed: Mon Aug 19 13:02:42 2013 +0530

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 docs/en-US/linux-installation.xml | 44 +++++++++++++++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 30 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/a2e615c4/docs/en-US/linux-installation.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/linux-installation.xml 
b/docs/en-US/linux-installation.xml
index 14a2f51..28be32d 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/linux-installation.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/linux-installation.xml
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
   <para>Use the following steps to begin the Linux OS installation:</para>
   <orderedlist>
     <listitem>
-      <para>Download the script file cloud-set-guest-password:</para>
+      <para>Download the script file 
<filename>cloud-set-guest-password</filename>:</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>Linux: <ulink
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
-      <para>Copy this file to /etc/init.d.</para>
+      <para>Copy this file to <filename>/etc/init.d</filename>.</para>
       <para>On some Linux distributions, copy the file to
         <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d</filename>.</para>
     </listitem>
@@ -52,19 +52,35 @@
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>Depending on the Linux distribution, continue with the appropriate 
step.</para>
-      <para>On Fedora, CentOS/RHEL, and Debian, run:</para>
-      <programlisting>chkconfig --add cloud-set-guest-password</programlisting>
-      <para condition="community">On Ubuntu with VMware tools, link the script 
file to the
-          <filename>/etc/network/if-up</filename> and 
<filename>/etc/network/if-down</filename>
-        folders, and run the script:</para>
-      <programlisting condition="community">#ln -s 
/etc/init.d/cloud-set-guest-password /etc/network/if-up/cloud-set-guest-password
+      <itemizedlist condition="community">
+        <listitem>
+          <para>On Fedora, CentOS/RHEL, and Debian, run:</para>
+          <programlisting>chkconfig --add 
cloud-set-guest-password</programlisting>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para condition="community">On Ubuntu with VMware tools, link the 
script file to the
+              <filename>/etc/network/if-up</filename> and 
<filename>/etc/network/if-down</filename>
+            folders, and run the script:</para>
+          <programlisting condition="community">#ln -s 
/etc/init.d/cloud-set-guest-password /etc/network/if-up/cloud-set-guest-password
 #ln -s /etc/init.d/cloud-set-guest-password 
/etc/network/if-down/cloud-set-guest-password</programlisting>
-      <para condition="community">If you are using Ubuntu 11.04, start by 
creating a directory
-        called /var/lib/dhcp3 on your Ubuntu machine (works around a known 
issue with this version
-        of Ubuntu). On all Ubuntu versions: Run “sudo update-rc.d 
cloud-set-guest-password defaults
-        98”. To test, run "mkpasswd" and check that it is generating a new 
password. If the
-        “mkpasswd” command does not exist, run "sudo apt-get install 
whois" (or sudo apt-get install
-        mkpasswd, depending on your Ubuntu version) and repeat.</para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para condition="community">If you are using Ubuntu 11.04, create a 
directory called
+              <filename>/var/lib/dhcp3</filename> on your Ubuntu 
machine.</para>
+          <para condition="community">This is to work around a known issue 
with this version of
+            Ubuntu. </para>
+          <para condition="community">Run the following command:</para>
+          <programlisting>sudo update-rc.d cloud-set-guest-password defaults 
98</programlisting>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para condition="community">On all Ubuntu versions, run:</para>
+          <programlisting>sudo update-rc.d cloud-set-guest-password defaults 
98</programlisting>
+          <para condition="community">To test, run <command>mkpasswd</command> 
and check whether a
+            new password is generated. If the <command>mkpasswd</command> 
command does not exist,
+            run <command>sudo apt-get install whois</command> or <command>sudo 
apt-get install
+              mkpasswd</command>, depending on your Ubuntu version.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
   </orderedlist>
 </section>

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