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Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/repo Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/commit/d4250802 Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/tree/d4250802 Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/diff/d4250802 Branch: refs/heads/4.2 Commit: d42508029809c16e6e576aa885d8c2109003bf14 Parents: 9f9f438 Author: Radhika PC <[email protected]> Authored: Fri Aug 23 15:58:33 2013 +0530 Committer: radhikap <[email protected]> Committed: Mon Aug 26 16:38:14 2013 +0530 ---------------------------------------------------------------------- docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml | 6 +++--- docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml | 2 +- docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml | 12 +++++------- docs/en-US/pvlan.xml | 2 +- 4 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) ---------------------------------------------------------------------- http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/d4250802/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml ---------------------------------------------------------------------- diff --git a/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml b/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml index 688ba34..a671329 100644 --- a/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml +++ b/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ <title>Adding a Network</title> <orderedlist> <listitem> - <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as an administrator or end user.</para> + <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as an administrator or end user.</para> </listitem> <listitem> <para>In the left navigation, click Instances.</para> @@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ <title>Removing a Network</title> <orderedlist> <listitem> - <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as an administrator or end user.</para> + <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as an administrator or end user.</para> </listitem> <listitem> <para>In the left navigation, click Instances.</para> @@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ <title>Selecting the Default Network</title> <orderedlist> <listitem> - <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as an administrator or end user.</para> + <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as an administrator or end user.</para> </listitem> <listitem> <para>In the left navigation, click Instances.</para> http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/d4250802/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml ---------------------------------------------------------------------- diff --git a/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml b/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml index 6c2b504..e6a018f 100644 --- a/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml +++ b/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ <title>Configuring a Shared Guest Network</title> <orderedlist> <listitem> - <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as administrator.</para> + <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as administrator.</para> </listitem> <listitem> <para>In the left navigation, choose Infrastructure.</para> http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/d4250802/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml ---------------------------------------------------------------------- diff --git a/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml b/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml index a1976da..193b916 100644 --- a/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml +++ b/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ extend the VLAN range.</para> <orderedlist> <listitem> - <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as an administrator or end user.</para> + <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as an administrator or end user.</para> </listitem> <listitem> <para>Ensure that the VLAN range does not already exist.</para> @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ <para>In the left navigation, choose Infrastructure. </para> </listitem> <listitem> - <para>On Zones, click View More, then click the zone with which you want to work.</para> + <para>On Zones, click View More, then click the zone to which you want to work with.</para> </listitem> <listitem> <para>Click Physical Network.</para> @@ -50,15 +50,13 @@ <imagedata fileref="./images/edit-icon.png"/> </imageobject> <textobject> - <phrase>edit-icon.png: button to add a VLAN range.</phrase> + <phrase>edit-icon.png: button to edit the VLAN range.</phrase> </textobject> </inlinemediaobject></para> - <para>The VLAN Ranges field now be editable.</para> + <para>The VLAN Ranges field now is editable.</para> </listitem> <listitem> - <para>Enter the start and end of the VLAN range. If you have multiple ranges, separate them by - a comma.</para> - <para>For example: 200-210,300-350,500-600, 100-110</para> + <para>Specify the start and end of the VLAN range in comma-separated list.</para> <para>Specify all the VLANs you want to use, VLANs not specified will be removed if you are adding new ranges to the existing list. </para> </listitem> http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/d4250802/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml ---------------------------------------------------------------------- diff --git a/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml b/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml index f647d93..eb4c1d8 100644 --- a/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml +++ b/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml @@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ <title>Creating a PVLAN-Enabled Guest Network</title> <orderedlist> <listitem> - <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as administrator.</para> + <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as administrator.</para> </listitem> <listitem> <para>In the left navigation, choose Infrastructure.</para>
