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CLOUDSTACK-815. DOC. Fix Regions documentation for reviewer comments.


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Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: f002b8e769a48962baccee233c84468d5c87d800
Parents: 19341d6
Author: Jessica <jessica.tomec...@citrix.com>
Authored: Wed Aug 28 16:39:31 2013 -0700
Committer: Jessica <jessica.tomec...@citrix.com>
Committed: Wed Aug 28 16:44:16 2013 -0700

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 docs/en-US/about-regions.xml | 5 +++--
 docs/en-US/region-add.xml    | 5 ++---
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/f002b8e7/docs/en-US/about-regions.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/about-regions.xml b/docs/en-US/about-regions.xml
index 432faeb..a12c183 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/about-regions.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/about-regions.xml
@@ -44,6 +44,7 @@
     </imageobject>
     <textobject><phrase>region-overview.png: Nested structure of a 
region.</phrase></textobject>
   </mediaobject>
-  <para>Regions are visible to the end user. When a user starts a guest VM, 
the user must select a region for their guest.
-      Users might also be required to copy their private templates to 
additional regions to enable creation of guest VMs using their templates in 
those regions.</para>
+  <para>Regions are visible to the end user.  When a user starts a guest VM on 
a particular &PRODUCT; Management Server,
+    the user is implicitly selecting that region for their guest.
+    Users might also be required to copy their private templates to additional 
regions to enable creation of guest VMs using their templates in those 
regions.</para>
   </section>
\ No newline at end of file

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/f002b8e7/docs/en-US/region-add.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/region-add.xml b/docs/en-US/region-add.xml
index b4dd181..212047a 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/region-add.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/region-add.xml
@@ -30,9 +30,8 @@
         <title>The First Region: The Default Region</title>
     <para>If you do not take action to define regions, then all the zones in 
your cloud will be
             automatically grouped into a single default region. This region is 
assigned the region
-            ID of 1.</para>
-        <para>You can change the name or URL of the default region by using 
the API command updateRegion. For example:</para>
-        
<programlisting>http://&lt;IP_of_Management_Server&gt;:8080/client/api?command=updateRegion&amp;id=1&amp;name=Northern&amp;endpoint=http://&lt;region_1_IP_address_here&gt;:8080/client&amp;apiKey=miVr6X7u6bN_sdahOBpjNejPgEsT35eXq-jB8CG20YI3yaxXcgpyuaIRmFI_EJTVwZ0nUkkJbPmY3y2bciKwFQ&amp;signature=Lxx1DM40AjcXU%2FcaiK8RAP0O1hU%3D</programlisting>
+            ID of 1. You can change the name or URL of the default region by 
displaying the region in
+            the &PRODUCT; UI and clicking the Edit button.</para>
     </section>
     <section id="region-add-2">
         <title>Adding a Region</title>

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