Copilot commented on code in PR #12136: URL: https://github.com/apache/cloudstack/pull/12136#discussion_r2563978638
########## README.md: ########## @@ -72,20 +84,46 @@ For more information on Apache CloudStack, please visit the [website](https://cl ## Who Uses CloudStack? -* There are more than 150 known organizations using Apache CloudStack (or a commercial distribution of CloudStack). Our users include many major service providers running CloudStack to offer public cloud services, product vendors who incorporate or integrate with CloudStack in their own products, organizations who have used CloudStack to build their own private clouds, and systems integrators that offer CloudStack related services. +* **Trusted by Global Leaders**: CloudStack is the backbone of infrastructure for major service providers, telecom operators, and enterprises worldwide. + > "CloudStack has enabled us to scale our public cloud offering with ease and reliability." - *Major Cloud Provider* -* See our [case studies](https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Case+Studies) highlighting successful deployments of Apache CloudStack. +* **Diverse User Base**: Over 150 known organizations use Apache CloudStack, including: + * [Apple](https://www.apple.com) + * [Disney](https://www.disney.com) + * [Huawei](https://www.huawei.com) + * *...and many more.* Review Comment: Listing specific company names like Apple, Disney, and Huawei without verification or sources is potentially problematic. Unless these companies have publicly confirmed they use CloudStack, this could be considered false advertising and could expose the project to legal issues. Either provide verified sources for these claims or remove the specific company names and rely on the existing "over 150 known organizations" statement with links to the official users page. ```suggestion * **Diverse User Base**: Over 150 known organizations use Apache CloudStack. See the up-to-date list of current [users](https://cloudstack.apache.org/users.html). ``` ########## README.md: ########## @@ -72,20 +84,46 @@ For more information on Apache CloudStack, please visit the [website](https://cl ## Who Uses CloudStack? -* There are more than 150 known organizations using Apache CloudStack (or a commercial distribution of CloudStack). Our users include many major service providers running CloudStack to offer public cloud services, product vendors who incorporate or integrate with CloudStack in their own products, organizations who have used CloudStack to build their own private clouds, and systems integrators that offer CloudStack related services. +* **Trusted by Global Leaders**: CloudStack is the backbone of infrastructure for major service providers, telecom operators, and enterprises worldwide. + > "CloudStack has enabled us to scale our public cloud offering with ease and reliability." - *Major Cloud Provider* Review Comment: The quote attributed to "Major Cloud Provider" is unverified and appears to be placeholder text. Using fabricated testimonials can damage credibility. Either use a real, attributed quote or remove this testimonial entirely. ```suggestion ``` ########## README.md: ########## @@ -72,20 +84,46 @@ For more information on Apache CloudStack, please visit the [website](https://cl ## Who Uses CloudStack? -* There are more than 150 known organizations using Apache CloudStack (or a commercial distribution of CloudStack). Our users include many major service providers running CloudStack to offer public cloud services, product vendors who incorporate or integrate with CloudStack in their own products, organizations who have used CloudStack to build their own private clouds, and systems integrators that offer CloudStack related services. +* **Trusted by Global Leaders**: CloudStack is the backbone of infrastructure for major service providers, telecom operators, and enterprises worldwide. + > "CloudStack has enabled us to scale our public cloud offering with ease and reliability." - *Major Cloud Provider* -* See our [case studies](https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Case+Studies) highlighting successful deployments of Apache CloudStack. +* **Diverse User Base**: Over 150 known organizations use Apache CloudStack, including: + * [Apple](https://www.apple.com) + * [Disney](https://www.disney.com) + * [Huawei](https://www.huawei.com) + * *...and many more.* -* See the up-to-date list of current [users](https://cloudstack.apache.org/users.html). +* See our [case studies](https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Case+Studies) highlighting successful deployments of Apache CloudStack. -* If you are using CloudStack in your organization and your company is not listed above, please complete our brief adoption [survey](https://cloudstack.apache.org/survey.html). We're happy to keep your company name anonymous if you require. +* See the up-to-date list of current [users](https://cloudstack.apache.org/users.html). -## Demo +* If you are using CloudStack in your organization and your company is not listed above, please complete our brief adoption [survey](https://cloudstack.apache.org/survey.html). We're happy to keep your company name anonymous if you require. - -See the project user-interface QA website that runs CloudStack against simulator hypervisor: -https://qa.cloudstack.cloud/simulator/ (admin:password) +## Quick Start / Try It Now + +The easiest way to try CloudStack is using the all-in-one Docker container. This is for **evaluation purposes only**. + +1. **Pull the Simulator Image**: + ```bash + docker pull apache/cloudstack-simulator + ``` + +2. **Run the Container**: + ```bash + docker run --name simulator -p 8080:5050 -d apache/cloudstack-simulator Review Comment: The port mapping appears incorrect. The command maps host port 8080 to container port 5050 (`-p 8080:5050`), but typically CloudStack's management server runs on port 8080 inside the container. This could lead to connection issues. Verify the correct port mapping for the apache/cloudstack-simulator image, or update the documentation to reflect the actual ports used. ```suggestion docker run --name simulator -p 8080:8080 -d apache/cloudstack-simulator ``` ########## README.md: ########## @@ -72,20 +84,46 @@ For more information on Apache CloudStack, please visit the [website](https://cl ## Who Uses CloudStack? -* There are more than 150 known organizations using Apache CloudStack (or a commercial distribution of CloudStack). Our users include many major service providers running CloudStack to offer public cloud services, product vendors who incorporate or integrate with CloudStack in their own products, organizations who have used CloudStack to build their own private clouds, and systems integrators that offer CloudStack related services. +* **Trusted by Global Leaders**: CloudStack is the backbone of infrastructure for major service providers, telecom operators, and enterprises worldwide. + > "CloudStack has enabled us to scale our public cloud offering with ease and reliability." - *Major Cloud Provider* Review Comment: [nitpick] The phrase "Trusted by Global Leaders" is marketing language that makes unsubstantiated claims. This heading should be more factual, such as "User Base" or simply removed in favor of the existing bullet points that follow. ```suggestion ``` ########## README.md: ########## @@ -49,17 +52,26 @@ <!-- END doctoc generated TOC please keep comment here to allow auto update --> -Apache CloudStack is open source software designed to deploy and manage large -networks of virtual machines, as a highly available, highly scalable -Infrastructure as a Service (IaaS) cloud computing platform. CloudStack is used -by a number of service providers to offer public cloud services, and by many -companies to provide an on-premises (private) cloud offering, or as part of a -hybrid cloud solution. +Apache CloudStack empowers organizations to build and manage highly available, scalable, and secure private, public, and hybrid clouds with unparalleled ease. Transform your infrastructure into a flexible, on-demand service with CloudStack's comprehensive IaaS platform. Review Comment: [nitpick] The marketing language "with unparalleled ease" is subjective and potentially exaggerated. Consider using more objective language such as "Apache CloudStack enables organizations to build and manage highly available, scalable, and secure private, public, and hybrid clouds" without the superlative claim. ```suggestion Apache CloudStack enables organizations to build and manage highly available, scalable, and secure private, public, and hybrid clouds. Transform your infrastructure into a flexible, on-demand service with CloudStack's comprehensive IaaS platform. ``` -- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected]
