techdocsmith commented on a change in pull request #11134:
URL: https://github.com/apache/druid/pull/11134#discussion_r619351726
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File path: docs/ingestion/index.md
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~ under the License.
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-## Overview
-
-All data in Druid is organized into _segments_, which are data files that
generally have up to a few million rows each.
-Loading data in Druid is called _ingestion_ or _indexing_ and consists of
reading data from a source system and creating
+All data in Druid is organized into _segments_, which are data files each of
which may have up to a few million rows.
+Loading data in Druid is called _ingestion_ or _indexing_, and consists of
reading data from a source system and creating
segments based on that data.
-In most ingestion methods, the work of loading data is done by Druid
[MiddleManager](../design/middlemanager.md) processes
-(or the [Indexer](../design/indexer.md) processes). One exception is
+In most ingestion methods, the Druid
[MiddleManager](../design/middlemanager.md) processes
+(or the [Indexer](../design/indexer.md) processes) do the work of loading
data. One exception is
Review comment:
```suggestion
(or the [Indexer](../design/indexer.md) processes) load your source data.
One exception is
```
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