techdocsmith commented on a change in pull request #11506:
URL: https://github.com/apache/druid/pull/11506#discussion_r694382528



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File path: docs/ingestion/native-batch.md
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@@ -369,11 +369,16 @@ Druid currently supports only one partition function.
 
 The Parallel task will use one subtask when you set `maxNumConcurrentSubTasks` 
to 1.
 
-> Be aware that, with this technique, segment sizes could be skewed if your 
chosen `partitionDimension` is also skewed in source data.
-
-> While it is technically possible to concatenate multiple dimensions into a 
single new dimension
-> that you go on to specify in `partitionDimension`, remember that you _must_ 
then use this newly concatenated dimension at query time
-> in order for segment pruning to be effective.
+> When using this technique to partition your data, segment sizes may be 
unequally distributed if the data
+> in your `partitionDimension` is also unequally distributed.  Therefore, 
avoid imbalance in data layout and

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   in your `partitionDimension` is also unequally distributed.  Therefore, to 
avoid imbalance in data layout, 
   ```

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File path: docs/ingestion/native-batch.md
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@@ -369,11 +369,16 @@ Druid currently supports only one partition function.
 
 The Parallel task will use one subtask when you set `maxNumConcurrentSubTasks` 
to 1.
 
-> Be aware that, with this technique, segment sizes could be skewed if your 
chosen `partitionDimension` is also skewed in source data.
-
-> While it is technically possible to concatenate multiple dimensions into a 
single new dimension
-> that you go on to specify in `partitionDimension`, remember that you _must_ 
then use this newly concatenated dimension at query time
-> in order for segment pruning to be effective.
+> When using this technique to partition your data, segment sizes may be 
unequally distributed if the data
+> in your `partitionDimension` is also unequally distributed.  Therefore, 
avoid imbalance in data layout and
+> review the distribution of values in your source data before deciding on a 
partitioning strategy.
+
+> In order for segment pruning to be effective and translate into better query 
performance, you _must_ use
+> the `partitionDimension` at query time.  You can concatenate values from 
multiple

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   the `partitionDimension` at query time.  You can concatenate values from 
multiple
   ```

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File path: docs/ingestion/native-batch.md
##########
@@ -369,11 +369,16 @@ Druid currently supports only one partition function.
 
 The Parallel task will use one subtask when you set `maxNumConcurrentSubTasks` 
to 1.
 
-> Be aware that, with this technique, segment sizes could be skewed if your 
chosen `partitionDimension` is also skewed in source data.
-
-> While it is technically possible to concatenate multiple dimensions into a 
single new dimension
-> that you go on to specify in `partitionDimension`, remember that you _must_ 
then use this newly concatenated dimension at query time
-> in order for segment pruning to be effective.
+> When using this technique to partition your data, segment sizes may be 
unequally distributed if the data
+> in your `partitionDimension` is also unequally distributed.  Therefore, 
avoid imbalance in data layout and
+> review the distribution of values in your source data before deciding on a 
partitioning strategy.
+
+> In order for segment pruning to be effective and translate into better query 
performance, you _must_ use
+> the `partitionDimension` at query time.  You can concatenate values from 
multiple
+> dimensions into a new dimension to use as the `partitionDimension`. In this 
case, you

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   dimensions into a new dimension to use as the `partitionDimension`. In this 
case, you
   ```

##########
File path: docs/ingestion/native-batch.md
##########
@@ -369,11 +369,16 @@ Druid currently supports only one partition function.
 
 The Parallel task will use one subtask when you set `maxNumConcurrentSubTasks` 
to 1.
 
-> Be aware that, with this technique, segment sizes could be skewed if your 
chosen `partitionDimension` is also skewed in source data.
-
-> While it is technically possible to concatenate multiple dimensions into a 
single new dimension
-> that you go on to specify in `partitionDimension`, remember that you _must_ 
then use this newly concatenated dimension at query time
-> in order for segment pruning to be effective.
+> When using this technique to partition your data, segment sizes may be 
unequally distributed if the data
+> in your `partitionDimension` is also unequally distributed.  Therefore, 
avoid imbalance in data layout and
+> review the distribution of values in your source data before deciding on a 
partitioning strategy.
+
+> In order for segment pruning to be effective and translate into better query 
performance, you _must_ use
+> the `partitionDimension` at query time.  You can concatenate values from 
multiple
+> dimensions into a new dimension to use as the `partitionDimension`. In this 
case, you
+> must use that new `partitionDimension` dimension in your

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   must use that new dimension in your native filter `WHERE` clause.
   ```
   I'm not convinced links are doing much work here. (maybe to filters).

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File path: docs/ingestion/native-batch.md
##########
@@ -369,11 +369,16 @@ Druid currently supports only one partition function.
 
 The Parallel task will use one subtask when you set `maxNumConcurrentSubTasks` 
to 1.
 
-> Be aware that, with this technique, segment sizes could be skewed if your 
chosen `partitionDimension` is also skewed in source data.
-
-> While it is technically possible to concatenate multiple dimensions into a 
single new dimension
-> that you go on to specify in `partitionDimension`, remember that you _must_ 
then use this newly concatenated dimension at query time
-> in order for segment pruning to be effective.
+> When using this technique to partition your data, segment sizes may be 
unequally distributed if the data
+> in your `partitionDimension` is also unequally distributed.  Therefore, 
avoid imbalance in data layout and
+> review the distribution of values in your source data before deciding on a 
partitioning strategy.

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
    review the distribution of values in your source data before deciding on a 
partitioning strategy.
   ```

##########
File path: docs/ingestion/native-batch.md
##########
@@ -369,11 +369,16 @@ Druid currently supports only one partition function.
 
 The Parallel task will use one subtask when you set `maxNumConcurrentSubTasks` 
to 1.
 
-> Be aware that, with this technique, segment sizes could be skewed if your 
chosen `partitionDimension` is also skewed in source data.
-
-> While it is technically possible to concatenate multiple dimensions into a 
single new dimension
-> that you go on to specify in `partitionDimension`, remember that you _must_ 
then use this newly concatenated dimension at query time
-> in order for segment pruning to be effective.
+> When using this technique to partition your data, segment sizes may be 
unequally distributed if the data

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   When you use this technique to partition your data, segment sizes may be 
unequally distributed if the data
   ```

##########
File path: docs/ingestion/native-batch.md
##########
@@ -369,11 +369,16 @@ Druid currently supports only one partition function.
 
 The Parallel task will use one subtask when you set `maxNumConcurrentSubTasks` 
to 1.
 
-> Be aware that, with this technique, segment sizes could be skewed if your 
chosen `partitionDimension` is also skewed in source data.
-
-> While it is technically possible to concatenate multiple dimensions into a 
single new dimension
-> that you go on to specify in `partitionDimension`, remember that you _must_ 
then use this newly concatenated dimension at query time
-> in order for segment pruning to be effective.
+> When using this technique to partition your data, segment sizes may be 
unequally distributed if the data
+> in your `partitionDimension` is also unequally distributed.  Therefore, 
avoid imbalance in data layout and
+> review the distribution of values in your source data before deciding on a 
partitioning strategy.
+
+> In order for segment pruning to be effective and translate into better query 
performance, you _must_ use

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   For segment pruning to be effective and translate into better query 
performance, you must use
   ```
   we don't use ital for emphasis. "must" is enough emphasis




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