vtlim commented on code in PR #14026:
URL: https://github.com/apache/druid/pull/14026#discussion_r1159148060


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docs/tutorials/tutorial-query.md:
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@@ -144,18 +144,19 @@ performance issues. For more information, see [Native 
queries](../querying/query
 9. Finally, click  `...`  and **Edit context** to see how you can add 
additional parameters controlling the execution of the query execution. In the 
field, enter query context options as JSON key-value pairs, as described in 
[Context flags](../querying/query-context.md).  
 
 That's it! We've built a simple query using some of the query builder features 
built into the web console. The following
-sections provide a few more example queries you can try. Also, see [Other ways 
to invoke SQL queries](#other-ways-to-invoke-sql-queries) to learn how
-to run Druid SQL from the command line or over HTTP. 
+sections provide a few more example queries you can try.
+
+See [Query SQL over HTTP](#query-sql-over-http) for an example of how to use 
the Druid SQL HTTP API. 
 
 ## More Druid SQL examples
 
-Here is a collection of queries to try out:
+Try the following queries to learn a few more Duid SQL tricks:

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   Try the following queries to learn a few more Druid SQL tricks:
   ```



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docs/tutorials/tutorial-query.md:
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@@ -165,58 +166,21 @@ GROUP BY 1
 
 ```sql
 SELECT channel, page, SUM(added)
-FROM wikipedia WHERE TIME_IN_INTERVAL("__time", '2015-09-12/2015-09-13')
+FROM wikipedia WHERE TIME_IN_INTERVAL("__time", '2016-06-27/2016-06-28')
 GROUP BY channel, page
 ORDER BY SUM(added) DESC
 ```
 
 ![Query example](../assets/tutorial-query-07.png "Query example")
 
-
-## Other ways to invoke SQL queries
-
-### Query SQL via dsql
-
-For convenience, the Druid package includes a SQL command-line client, located 
at `bin/dsql` in the Druid package root.
-
-Let's now run `bin/dsql`; you should see the following prompt:
-
-```bash
-Welcome to dsql, the command-line client for Druid SQL.
-Type "\h" for help.
-dsql>
-```
-
-To submit the query, paste it to the `dsql` prompt and press enter:
-
-```bash
-dsql> SELECT page, COUNT(*) AS Edits FROM wikipedia WHERE 
TIME_IN_INTERVAL("__time", '2015-09-12/2015-09-13') GROUP BY page ORDER BY 
Edits DESC LIMIT 10;
-┌──────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┬───────┐
-│ page                                                     │ Edits │
-├──────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┼───────┤
-│ Wikipedia:Vandalismusmeldung                             │    33 │
-│ User:Cyde/List of candidates for speedy deletion/Subpage │    28 │
-│ Jeremy Corbyn                                            │    27 │
-│ Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents          │    21 │
-│ Flavia Pennetta                                          │    20 │
-│ Total Drama Presents: The Ridonculous Race               │    18 │
-│ User talk:Dudeperson176123                               │    18 │
-│ Wikipédia:Le Bistro/12 septembre 2015                    │    18 │
-│ Wikipedia:In the news/Candidates                         │    17 │
-│ Wikipedia:Requests for page protection                   │    17 │
-└──────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┴───────┘
-Retrieved 10 rows in 0.06s.
-```
-
-
-### Query SQL over HTTP
+## Query SQL over HTTP
 
 
-You can submit native queries [directly to the Druid Broker over 
HTTP](../querying/sql-api.md#submit-a-query). The request body should be a JSON 
object, with the value for the key `query` containing text of the query:
+You can submit native queries [over 
HTTP](../querying/sql-api.md#submit-a-query). The request body should be a JSON 
object, with the value for the key `query` containing text of the query:

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   You can submit native queries [over 
HTTP](../querying/sql-api.md#submit-a-query). The request body is a JSON object 
in which the `query` field contains the text of the query:
   ```



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