ektravel commented on code in PR #14356:
URL: https://github.com/apache/druid/pull/14356#discussion_r1213354247


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docs/development/extensions-core/kinesis-ingestion.md:
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@@ -577,9 +579,9 @@ for this segment granularity is created for further events. 
Kinesis Indexing Tas
 means that all the segments created by a task will not be held up till the 
task duration is over. As soon as maxRowsPerSegment,
 maxTotalRows or intermediateHandoffPeriod limit is hit, all the segments held 
by the task at that point in time will be handed-off
 and new set of segments will be created for further events. This means that 
the task can run for longer durations of time
-without accumulating old segments locally on Middle Manager processes and it 
is encouraged to do so.
+without accumulating old segments locally on Middle Manager processes, and it 
is encouraged to do so.
 
-Kinesis Indexing Service may still produce some small segments. Lets say the 
task duration is 4 hours, segment granularity
+Kinesis Indexing Service may still produce some small segments. Let's say the 
task duration is 4 hours, segment granularity
 is set to an HOUR and Supervisor was started at 9:10 then after 4 hours at 
13:10, new set of tasks will be started and

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   is set to an HOUR and Supervisor was started at 9:10 then after 4 hours at 
13:10. The new set of tasks will be started and
   ```
   Consider breaking this long sentence into two to make it easier to read.



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