Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5039: [doc] Improve 
Pulsar Security-token-client
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5039#discussion_r317557464
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/security-token-client.md
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 @@ -9,20 +9,18 @@ sidebar_label: Client Authentication using tokens
 Pulsar supports authenticating clients using security tokens that are based on
 [JSON Web Tokens](https://jwt.io/introduction/) 
([RFC-7519](https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7519)).
 
-Tokens are used to identify a Pulsar client and associate with some 
"principal" (or "role") which
+You can use tokens to identify a Pulsar client and associate with some 
"principal" (or "role") that
 
 Review comment:
   Avoid to use "will be". 
   Try present tense. Check all similar cases.

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