Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5039: [doc] Improve Pulsar Security-token-client URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5039#discussion_r317917561
########## File path: site2/docs/security-token-client.md ########## @@ -9,20 +9,18 @@ sidebar_label: Client Authentication using tokens Pulsar supports authenticating clients using security tokens that are based on [JSON Web Tokens](https://jwt.io/introduction/) ([RFC-7519](https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7519)). -Tokens are used to identify a Pulsar client and associate with some "principal" (or "role") which -will be then granted permissions to do some actions (eg: publish or consume from a topic). +You can use tokens to identify a Pulsar client and associate with some "principal" (or "role") that +is permitted to do some actions (eg: publish or consume from a topic) then. Review comment: 1. do not use abbreviation in technical writing, not use "eg, etc. ...", you can use "for example", "such as". 2. complete information: publish messages to a topic, consume messages from a topic. 3. delete "then" at the end. ---------------------------------------------------------------- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected] With regards, Apache Git Services
