Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5069: [doc] Improve Pulsar Security Kerberos URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5069#discussion_r319384515
########## File path: site2/docs/security-kerberos.md ########## @@ -187,46 +183,46 @@ The following is an example of creating a Java client: .build(); ``` -> The first two lines in the example above are hard coded, alternatively, you can set additional JVM parameters for JAAS and krb5 configuration file when running the application like below: +> The first two lines in the example above are hard coded, alternatively, you can set additional JVM parameters for JAAS and krb5 configuration file when you are running the application like below: ``` java -cp -Djava.security.auth.login.config=/etc/pulsar/pulsar_jaas.conf -Djava.security.krb5.conf=/etc/pulsar/krb5.conf $APP-jar-with-dependencies.jar $CLASSNAME ``` -Make sure that the keytabs configured in the `pulsar_jaas.conf` file and kdc server in the `krb5.conf` file are reachable by the operating system user who is starting pulsar client. +You must ensure that the operating system user who is starting pulsar client can reach the keytabs configured in the `pulsar_jaas.conf` file and kdc server in the `krb5.conf` file. #### Configure CLI tools If you are using a command-line tool (such as `bin/pulsar-client`, `bin/pulsar-perf` and `bin/pulsar-admin`), you need to preform the following steps: -Step 1. Config your `client.conf`. +Step 1. Enter the command below to config your `client.conf`. Review comment: config-->configure ---------------------------------------------------------------- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: us...@infra.apache.org With regards, Apache Git Services