Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5069: [doc] Improve 
Pulsar Security Kerberos
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5069#discussion_r319384515
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/security-kerberos.md
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 @@ -187,46 +183,46 @@ The following is an example of creating a Java client:
          .build();
  ```
 
-> The first two lines in the example above are hard coded, alternatively, you 
can set additional JVM parameters for JAAS and krb5 configuration file when 
running the application like below:
+> The first two lines in the example above are hard coded, alternatively, you 
can set additional JVM parameters for JAAS and krb5 configuration file when you 
are running the application like below:
 
 ```
 java -cp -Djava.security.auth.login.config=/etc/pulsar/pulsar_jaas.conf 
-Djava.security.krb5.conf=/etc/pulsar/krb5.conf $APP-jar-with-dependencies.jar 
$CLASSNAME
 ```
 
-Make sure that the keytabs configured in the `pulsar_jaas.conf` file and kdc 
server in the `krb5.conf` file are reachable by the operating system user who 
is starting pulsar client.
+You must ensure that the operating system user who is starting pulsar client 
can reach the keytabs configured in the `pulsar_jaas.conf` file and kdc server 
in the `krb5.conf` file.
 
 #### Configure CLI tools
 
 If you are using a command-line tool (such as `bin/pulsar-client`, 
`bin/pulsar-perf` and `bin/pulsar-admin`), you need to preform the following 
steps:
 
-Step 1. Config your `client.conf`.
+Step 1. Enter the command below to config your `client.conf`.
 
 Review comment:
   config-->configure

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