Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5092: [doc] Improve 
Pulsar Security Extending
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5092#discussion_r321196192
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/security-extending.md
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 @@ -4,21 +4,17 @@ title: Extending Authentication and Authorization in Pulsar
 sidebar_label: Extending
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-Pulsar provides a way to use custom authentication and authorization mechanisms
+Pulsar provides a way to use custom authentication and authorization 
mechanisms.
 
 ## Authentication
 
-Pulsar support mutual TLS and Athenz authentication plugins, and these can be 
used as described
-in [Security](security-overview.md).
+Pulsar supports mutual TLS and Athenz authentication plugins, and you can use 
these authentication plugins following the description in 
[Security](security-overview.md).
 
-It is possible to use a custom authentication mechanism by providing the 
implementation in the
-form of two plugins one for the Client library and the other for the Pulsar 
Broker to validate
-the credentials.
+You can choose to use a custom authentication mechanism by providing the 
implementation in the form of two plugins. One for the Client library and the 
other for the Pulsar Broker to validate the credentials.
 
 ### Client authentication plugin
 
-For client library, you will need to implement 
`org.apache.pulsar.client.api.Authentication`. This class can then be passed
-when creating a Pulsar client:
+For client library, you needs to implement 
`org.apache.pulsar.client.api.Authentication`. By entering the command below 
you can pass this class when you create a Pulsar client:
 
 Review comment:
   you needs?

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