sijia-w commented on a change in pull request #11452:
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/11452#discussion_r680795618



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File path: site2/docs/deploy-bare-metal.md
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@@ -44,28 +43,25 @@ To run Pulsar on bare metal, the following configuration is 
recommended:
 
 > **Note**
 >
-> Broker is only supported on 64-bit JVM.
-
-> If you do not have enough machines, or to try out Pulsar in cluster mode 
(and expand the cluster later),
+> * Broker is only supported on 64-bit JVM.
+> * If you do not have enough machines, or to try out Pulsar in cluster mode 
(and expand the cluster later),
 > you can deploy a full Pulsar configuration on one node, where Zookeeper, the 
 > bookie and broker are run on the same machine.
-
-> If you do not have a DNS server, you can use the multi-host format in the 
service URL instead.
-
+> * If you do not have a DNS server, you can use the multi-host format in the 
service URL instead.
 Each machine in your cluster needs to have [Java 
8](https://adoptopenjdk.net/?variant=openjdk8) or [Java 
11](https://adoptopenjdk.net/?variant=openjdk11) installed.
 
 The following is a diagram showing the basic setup:
 
 ![alt-text](assets/pulsar-basic-setup.png)
 
-In this diagram, connecting clients need to be able to communicate with the 
Pulsar cluster using a single URL. In this case, `pulsar-cluster.acme.com` 
abstracts over all of the message-handling brokers. Pulsar message brokers run 
on machines alongside BookKeeper bookies; brokers and bookies, in turn, rely on 
ZooKeeper.
+In this diagram, connecting clients need to communicate with the Pulsar 
cluster using a single URL. In this case, `pulsar-cluster.acme.com` abstracts 
over all of the message-handling brokers. Pulsar message brokers run on 
machines alongside BookKeeper bookies; brokers and bookies, in turn, rely on 
ZooKeeper.
 
 ### Hardware considerations
 
-When you deploy a Pulsar cluster, keep in mind the following basic better 
choices when you do the capacity planning.
+If you deploy a Pulsar cluster, keep in mind the following basic better 
choices when you do the capacity planning.

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   When deploying a Pulsar cluster, keep in mind that the capacity of your 
deployment might benefit from the following configuration.
   ```
   
   For your reference.




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