sijia-w commented on a change in pull request #11452:
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/11452#discussion_r680806333



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@@ -180,7 +176,7 @@ For more details of how to configure tiered storage 
feature, you can refer to th
 
 > If you already have an exsiting zookeeper cluster and want to use it, you 
 > can skip this section.
 
-[ZooKeeper](https://zookeeper.apache.org) manages a variety of essential 
coordination- and configuration-related tasks for Pulsar. To deploy a Pulsar 
cluster, you need to deploy ZooKeeper first (before all other components). A 
3-node ZooKeeper cluster is the recommended configuration. Pulsar does not make 
heavy use of ZooKeeper, so more lightweight machines or VMs should suffice for 
running ZooKeeper.
+[ZooKeeper](https://zookeeper.apache.org) manages a variety of essential 
coordination-related and configuration-related tasks for Pulsar. To deploy a 
Pulsar cluster, you need to deploy ZooKeeper first. A 3-node ZooKeeper cluster 
is the recommended configuration. Pulsar does not make heavy use of ZooKeeper, 
so more lightweight machines or VMs should suffice for running ZooKeeper.
 
 To begin, add all ZooKeeper servers to the configuration specified in 
[`conf/zookeeper.conf`](reference-configuration.md#zookeeper) (in the Pulsar 
directory that you create [above](#install-the-pulsar-binary-package)). The 
following is an example:

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