"John Keller" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> writes:

> [oops, I didn't include Camille or Till before]
> 
> Buchan Milne wrote:
> > I added a new page for it:
> >
> > http://qa.mandrakesoft.com/twiki/bin/view/Main/AddHardwareHowTo
> 
> D'oh!
> 
> I just finished a page at
> http://qa.mandrakesoft.com/twiki/bin/view/Main/HardwareHowTo
> 
> I formatted it, cleaned it up, and added a bit of extra explanation at key
> points.
> 
> > Some formatting was not totally retained, but I don't have time to fix
> > it now, I also merged some stuff gc wrote.
> >
> > Better final instructions are needed on how to submit this (diff -u ?,
> > who to mail it to?).
> 
> Good question. Buchan, would you like to make yours The Page, or would you
> prefer to merge GC's stuff into my version? I can do the merge if you'd
> like, but I'm heading out in the next 15 minutes or so.

a few remarks:

- "The format is "VendorName; ModelName; EISA_ID; HorizSync_Range;
  VertRefresh_Range; supports_dpms"."

  => maybe should we use a different font for the text between quotes,
  ranging from "VendorName" up to "support_dpms" ?


- after "aumix -q", let's add:
  "amixer would tell you more informations if your sound card uses an
  ALSA driver (that is its module name begin by "snd-")"


- after first paragraph of "pci devices" section.
  maybe should we add the following:
         (eg: "[hardware] 3com905 network card")


- s/ld also start them)./ld also load them)./
            ///\\

 
- s/It failed because the driver does not properly export its IDs/
    It failed because the driver does not properly export the IDs of
    the devices it supports/


- s/but does the device is recognized/
    but the device does be recognized on manual module loading/


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