"John Keller" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> writes:
> [oops, I didn't include Camille or Till before]
>
> Buchan Milne wrote:
> > I added a new page for it:
> >
> > http://qa.mandrakesoft.com/twiki/bin/view/Main/AddHardwareHowTo
>
> D'oh!
>
> I just finished a page at
> http://qa.mandrakesoft.com/twiki/bin/view/Main/HardwareHowTo
>
> I formatted it, cleaned it up, and added a bit of extra explanation at key
> points.
>
> > Some formatting was not totally retained, but I don't have time to fix
> > it now, I also merged some stuff gc wrote.
> >
> > Better final instructions are needed on how to submit this (diff -u ?,
> > who to mail it to?).
>
> Good question. Buchan, would you like to make yours The Page, or would you
> prefer to merge GC's stuff into my version? I can do the merge if you'd
> like, but I'm heading out in the next 15 minutes or so.
a few remarks:
- "The format is "VendorName; ModelName; EISA_ID; HorizSync_Range;
VertRefresh_Range; supports_dpms"."
=> maybe should we use a different font for the text between quotes,
ranging from "VendorName" up to "support_dpms" ?
- after "aumix -q", let's add:
"amixer would tell you more informations if your sound card uses an
ALSA driver (that is its module name begin by "snd-")"
- after first paragraph of "pci devices" section.
maybe should we add the following:
(eg: "[hardware] 3com905 network card")
- s/ld also start them)./ld also load them)./
///\\
- s/It failed because the driver does not properly export its IDs/
It failed because the driver does not properly export the IDs of
the devices it supports/
- s/but does the device is recognized/
but the device does be recognized on manual module loading/