From the Editorial Desk... Here's a list of typos and editorial improvements for the RC2 installer splash screens:
1. "Get the most from the internet" screen:
"...selected the best softwares for your..." should be
"...selected the best software for your..."
2. "User Interfaces" screen:
"...which can be fully modified..." should be
"...that can be fully modified..."
3. "Optimize your security" screen:
"...which allow..." should be
"...that allow..."
4. "Mandrakesoft Store" screen:
"goodies", should be "goodies,"
(The comma should be inside the quotes.)
5. "Become a Mandrake Expert" screen:
"...help your others by becoming..." should be
"...help others by becoming..."
6. "Turn your machine into a reliable server" screen:
"...in a few clicks of your mouse" is better as
"...with a few clicks of your mouse"
Rich
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ars Cognita Richard Tango-Lowy
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President
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603 424-0713
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