> On Nov 16, 2016, at 12:18 PM, Joe Wang <huizhe.w...@oracle.com> wrote:
> 
> 
> 
> On 11/16/16, 8:03 AM, Roger Riggs wrote:
>> Hi Daniel,
>> 
>> DocumentBuilderFactory and classes:
>>   - The new methods uses "Creates" instead of "Obtain";
>>     perhaps it should be consistent with existing newInstance methods?
> 
> "Obtain" was used in the early version of JAXP, and "Creates" in newer StAX 
> factories. I used "Creates" as an example to explain the norm of writing 
> Javadoc (the description is in 3rd person). If we want the consistency, we 
> could do "Obtains" in the JAXP factories and "Creates" in StAX, 
> alternatively, we could change all of them.

I would work towards consistency throughout.  Personally I prefer “Creates” 
over “Obtains”


> 
> Regards,
> Joe
> 
>> 
>>   -  "Otherwise," and "Otherwise" (with and without ",") are not consistent 
>> in the webrev.
>> 
>> 
>> XMLInputFactory.java:
>>  -line 212: the "system-default" should be inside the braces with the @link.
>> 
>> SchemaFactory.java:
>>  - line 201:  (pre-existing typo) "in a implementation" -> "in an 
>> implementation"
>> 
>> XPathFactory.java
>> - line 177: The {@linkplain platform...} doesn't look like a properly formed 
>> link.
>> 
>> 
>> XMLOutputFactoryNewInstanceTest
>> - line 2, has a 1999 date but is a new file.
>> 
>> Many of the files have long lines (some new) that make side-by-side compares 
>> not fit on the screen.
>> 
>> Regards, Roger
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> On 11/16/2016 10:24 AM, Daniel Fuchs wrote:
>>> Hi,
>>> 
>>> Please find below a patch for:
>>> 8169778: Add new public methods to get new instances of the
>>>         JAXP factories builtin system-default implementations
>>> 
>>> bug: https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8169778
>>> webrev: http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~dfuchs/webrev_8169778/webrev.00/
>>> 
>>> best regards,
>>> 
>>> -- daniel
>> 

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